barbecue
sunrise
a sea of clouds
tent windmill风车
sausage香肠
Q1：Where did I camp?
Q2：In your opinion, what should be taken to make a good
camping?
1. an appropriate amount of food and drinks
2. warm clothes to stay away from coldness
3. first-aid box in case of emergency
4. a cellphone to take pictures and contact
5. a companinon to take care of each other
......
My first camping trip
Kuocang Mountain
Jane Tom lake walked climbed at a distance
stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blouse
who (人物）：
setting（场景）：
event（事件）：
Jane & Tom
lake stream
walked climbed
helicopter yellow blouse
to her great joy at a distance
？
Predict:
Classify:
Read the underlined key words
in the forest or mountain
in need of help
Read the timeline of the story
Timeline
One weekend in July
Jane rose at the break of day
It was daybreak when she woke up.
Para. 5-7 Para. 8Para.1-4
Who:
What:
How:
Why:
Read Day 1
Jane & Tom
camp overnight
by a lake in the forest
an unpleasant subject came up
left Tom and walked away alone
(a couple)
Q1：How did Jane restore her strength?
Read Day 2
She walked along the stream.
Because of the trees
Going to an open area to flag them using yellow blouse
She drank and ate a few berries.
Q2：What did Jane try to do to return to the lake?
Q3：Why did she fail to be noticed by the helicopters?
Q4：What was her thought to make helicopters notice her?
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband
Tom drove to a lake to ______ overnight. On
the way they had a ______, Jane was so
_____ that she walked away. Suddenly, she
found herself ______ and had to stay for the
night. The next day, she restored her strength
and tried to return to the lake by _______
along the stream. She heard two __________
but failed to be _______ because of the trees.
So she went to an _____ area to _____ them
using yellow blouse if they came back again.
Summarize the main plot based on para.1 to 6
camp
quarrel
angry
lost
walking
helicopters
noticed
open flag
1. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that...(para1)
2. “Tom!”she cried. “Help!”(para3)
3. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom
and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him...(para4)
4. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and
ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better.(para5)
5. Is that for me?(para6)
6. But no more helicopters came that afternoon.(para7)
angry
Read the change of Jane's feelings
scared regretful disappointed
？
Q：What kind of person is Jane?
joyful
hopeful
implusive冲动的 smart
Para. 7:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Para. 8:
It was daybreak when she woke up.
In para.7, If Jane & Tom still didn't find each other,
In para.7, If Jane & Tom finally found each other,
Analyze the 2 leading sentences & predict the development
Possibility 1
Possibility 2
she probably spent another night in the forest.
In para.8, Jane was finally rescued.
she may spend the second night at home/in the hospital.
In para.8, Jane woke up and they shared loving words.
Para. 7:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Q1: How did Jane feel?
stayed in the forest for another night
Q2: What could she do?
disappointed/hopeless
Q3: What was Tom probably doing at that time?
worried about Jane and didn't give up searching
Make an outline of Para. 7
Possibility 1
missed Tom and her family more
Para. 8:
It was daybreak when she woke up.
Q1: What would Jane do after she woke up?
He or Rescue workers spotted Jane in the helicopter
and landed to rescue her.
Q2: Did Tom finally find Jane? How?
She went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.
Q3: What would be their reaction when meeting each
other again?
They may hug each other and share loving words.
Make an outline of Para. 8
Possibility 1
Jane Tom lake walked climbed at a distance
stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blouse
Para. 7:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
1. Jane was disappointed and hopeless.
2. She had to stay in the forest for another night and missed Tom.
3. Tom was very worried and didn't give up searching.
Para. 8:
It was daybreak when she woke up.
1. Jane still went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.
2. Tom spotted Jane in the helicopter and landed to rescue her.
3. They hugged each other and share loving words.
Choose at least 5 underlined key words for further use
Jane was disappointed and hopeless.
She had to stay in the forest for another night and missed
Tom.
Tom was very worried and didn't give up searching.
Tired and disappointed, Jane felt hopeless and couldn't help blaming
herself. The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her, making
her feel even more regretful for her foolish behavior.
She had no choice but to stop for another night, spending the long
and lonely night. A gust of cold wind blew and she started to miss the
warmth of Tom's hug. Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet
memories of their family life.
As for Tom, the concern for his wife grew with the passage of time.
He was in the helicopter, searching for Jane with all his efforts.
Though the search proved fruitless, the difficulty was no match for
his deep love and firm determination.
Expand the outline of Para. 7 into a passage
Para. 7:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Tired and
disappointed, Jane felt hopeless and couldn't help blaming herself.
The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her, making her feel
even more regretful for her foolish behavior. She had no choice but
to stop for another night, spending the long and lonely night. A gust
of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Tom's hug.
Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their
family life. As for Tom, the concern for his wife grew with the
passage of time. He was in the helicopter, searching for Jane with all
his efforts. Though the search proved fruitless, the difficulty was no
match for his deep love and firm determination.
Expand the outline of Para. 7 into a passage
Jane still went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.
Tom spotted Jane in the helicopter and landed to rescue her.
They hugged each other and shared loving words.
She drank and ate a few berries as the day before. She was waiting
in the open area when a helicopter at a distance came into sight.
With the sound getting louder and closer, she jumped, yelled and
waved the yellow blouse with all her strength to be noticed.
To her great joy, she was spotted and the helicopter landed in a
minute. It was Tom who jumped out of the helicopter first.
He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly. “Thank
Goodness, I know you will come to me,” Jane sobbed. Despite the big
sound of helicopter, Jane could still hear the gentle words “Honey, I
love you.” from Tom.
Expand the outline of Para. 8 into a passage
Para. 8:
It was daybreak when she woke up. She drank and ate a few berries
as the day before. She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter
at a distance came into sight. With the sound getting louder and
closer, she jumped, yelled and waved the yellow blouse with all her
strength to be noticed. To her great joy, she was spotted and the
helicopter landed in a minute. It was Tom who jumped out of the
helicopter first. He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly.
“Thank Goodness, I know you will come to me,” Jane sobbed.
Despite the big sound of helicopter, Jane could still hear the gentle
words “Honey, I love you.” from Tom.
Expand the outline of Para. 8 into a passage
True love
never fails
Decide the theme for the story
Cherish
what you
have
Solve the
problems
positively
Never give
up when in
trouble
(A) (B)
(C) (D)
1. The difficulty is no match for Tom’s love and duty.
2. There is no doubt that the risky experience made the bond between
them much stronger.
3. Finally they went home together and know they should treasure each
other.
4. Love is one thing which will never fade away despite the argument.
5. No matter difficult the situation is, we should never give up hope.
6. It was their true love that saved Jane.
7. Thus, appreciate things you have now because you’ll know how much
you need them when you lose them.
8. No matter how difficult it was, their love would lead the way for them.
9. They hugged each other tightly and promised that they won’t ignore
each other’s feeling anymore.
10. Only if you have the belief of survival can you get out of trouble.
Which theme does each sentence reflect?
11. It was last night that I realized how much I love you. The little
quarrel will separate us.
12. Through this experience, they both had a deep understanding of their
love.
13. They never argue again. Instead, they solved problems with patience
and much understanding.
14. Valuing what we have now is the most important thing.
15. With these words, they hugged each other as nobody can separate
them.
16. It was Jane’s strong belief that rescued her.
17. It’s true that nowhere else can be better than somewhere you are with
your beloved.
18. Jane knew forgiving was so important that she would never do wrong
things with anger.
19. Only when you have the risk of losing will you realize the meaning
of true love.
20. Love is the strongest bond that binds you & your loved ones together.
Which theme does each sentence reflect?
No matter how difficult it was,
their love would lead the way for them.
My theme for the story:
True love
never fails
Decide the theme for the story
Cherish
what you
have
Solve the
problems
positively
Never give
up when in
trouble
(A) (B)
(C) (D)
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Tired and
disappointed, Jane felt hopeless and couldn't help blaming herself.
The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her, making her feel
even more regretful for her foolish behavior. She had no choice but
to stop for another night, spending the long and lonely night. A gust
of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Tom's hug.
Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their family
life. As for Tom, the concern for his wife grew with the passage of
time. He was in the helicopter, searching for Jane with all his efforts.
Though the search proved fruitless, the difficulty was no match for
his deep love and firm determination.
It was daybreak when she woke up. She drank and ate a few berries
as the day before. She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter
at a distance came into sight. With the sound getting louder and
closer, she jumped, yelled and waved the yellow blouse with all her
strength to be noticed. To her great joy, she was spotted and the
helicopter landed in a minute. It was Tom who jumped out of the
helicopter first. He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly.
“Thank Goodness, I know you will come to me.” Jane sobbed.
Despite the big sound of helicopter, Jane could still hear the gentle
words “Honey, I love you.” from Tom. No matter how difficult it was,
their love would lead the way for them.
One possible version of final draft
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