人教高中英语5Unit5writing课件

Unit5 First aid Writing An air crash What do you think is most important for the passengers after an air crash ? First Aid! Immediate medical help! Learn some knowledge of first aid from the dialogues. Listen and write down the missing words. Part Situation Treatment 1 Someone’s clothes on fire 1. Stop him from________ around. 2. Tell him to ______ to the floor and ______ him with a thick ______. 3. _____ him on the ground till the fire goes out. 4. ______ him for burns. running drop cloth Roll Treat cover Part Situation Treatment 2 a sprained ankle 1. ___ him down. 2. Put ice on the ______. 3. Put ____ up on a chair 4. Bandage his ankle _______. ankle foot tightly Sit A First aid quiz Clothes on fire Stop ______________; _____ on the ground to _______the fire; _____ him with a thick ______. running around Roll put out Cover cloth Bleeding Stop _________by _______the wound; __________it__________. bleeding pressing bandage tightly Broken bones Don’t ______the broken bone; _________it with a hard ________; Use a piece of________ to _______it. move Support board bandage fasten A Malaysian passenger plane carrying 239 people, including 153 Chinese lost contact(失联)on 2014, March 8th. In the past two months, even a piece of wreckage(残骸) of the plane hasn’t been found. What does this picture remind you of ? 假设MH370迫降在了一个荒岛上,你的朋友Jane在 飞机上,请你给她捎去一段话, 帮助她及时自救,并 表达美好祝愿。 注意：1.参考词汇： 自救 give first aid to yourself 逃出机舱 escape from the capsule 2. 词数80词左右，可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯 Dear Jane: It’s a relief to know the plane you took, MH370 has landed on a deserted island. I feel excited but worried, because I can’t give you help at once. So do follow these instructions. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 假设MH370迫降在了一个荒岛上,你的朋友Jane在 飞机上,请你给她捎去一段话, 帮助她及时自救,并 表达美好祝愿。 注意：1.参考词汇： 自救 give first aid to yourself 逃出机舱 escape from the capsule 2. 词数80词左右，可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯 Step 1 审题 (topic exploration) 审时态(tense): 审人称(person): 审要点(points): 2 points you do /be doing give first aid to yourself your wish and hope Step2 拓展细节 After…,you must… and watch out for…. In case (万一)…, make sure not…. Once(一旦)… don’t…; you should… then… Point 1: give first aid to yourself If…,take care to…and then... Point 2： your wish and hope I hope…I am looking forward to …and…. Step3 检查润色 1.巧用过渡词——衔接美(巧妙衔接过渡,读文如沐春风) 举例：for example/for instance/such as 顺序: To begin with,…moreover,…finally,… 因果: As a result/Therefore/Thus 对比: On the contrary On one hand,…on the other hand,… 强调: Moreover/Besides/What’s more 总结: In a word/On the whole 2.巧用高级词汇、句式——内在美(走出平庸,创高分) 3.完善成文——外在美(书写清晰规范,卷面漂亮美观) Step 4: 写作 Dear Jane: It’s a relief to know the plane you took, MH370 have landed on a deserted island. I feel excited but worried, because I can’t give you help at once. So do follow these instructions. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Nothing is impossible and miracles do happen! Let’s tell all passengers on board Mh370 : wherever or whoever you are, forget all the fear and worry ! Do remember we are always missing and waiting for you! Homework Polish your writing and share it with each other.