高考英语二轮专题复习：短文改错 课件

短文改错 Error correction 测试点分布 词法 句法 行文逻辑 1.名词 2.动词 3.代词 4.冠词 5.介词 6.形容词、副词 考查学生对语言知识的 掌握和综合运用语言的 能力。 Step1.完成全国卷三的改错巩固练习。（独立完成） Step2.分类练习单句改错，总结改词类型,掌握改错口诀。 一、从词法设问检查考生对词汇的理解、记忆和辨别能力。在高考短文改错题中，这 类改错题主要考查考生对单词、短语及固定搭配的理解、记忆和辨别能力。 Group 1 改词类型：介词 1.My soccer coach retired in last week. (2015 陕西) 解析：因last week前习惯上不用介词，故应删去in。 2....and wait your teacher to lead you outside. (2014 四川) for 解析：因wait for sb. to do(等待某人做某事)是固定搭配，故wait后加for。 3. On the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. (2015 课标) 解析：with the development of 表示“随着……发展……”。 ＾ ____ With retire vt. 退休 Group 2 改词类型：冠词 4.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. (2015 浙江) 解析：因in a hurry”匆忙”是固定短语，所以在hurry前加a。 5.He was right there in the front of me. (2011 陕西) 解析：因in the front of意为“在……（内部）的前面”；in front of 意为“在 ……（外部）的前面”，“他就在我前面”肯定是我外部的前面，故删除其中的the。 6.Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. (2014 辽宁) 解析：average 前的a应换成 an, 因average以元音音素开头。 ___ an ＾ a 倾向于 Group 3 改词类型：名词 7. The teacher was angry because we had the same answers in the tests. (2013 四川) 解析：tests应改为test,因本句指的是这一次测试，不用复数形式。 8.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. (2011 课标) 解析：luggages应改为luggage,因luggage为不可数名词，无复数。 ___ test __________ luggage Group4 改词类型：词性的混用 此类错误主要集中在形容词与副词的混用，形容词与名词的混用和动词与名词的混用等。 9. Dad and I were terrible worried. (2015 课标) 解析：修饰形容词worried应用副词, 故改terrible为terribly。 10.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car... (2012 浙江) 解析：放句首作状语，修饰整个句子，要用副词，故改Unfortunate为Unfortunately。 11.He has ruined his healthy. (2013 辽宁) 解析：作宾语或者说在形容词性物主代词后要用名词，故把healthy改为health。 __________ terribly ——————— Unfortunately __________ health Group5 改词类型：代词 12.I was eager to see Mr. Johnson, but outside her room, I stopped. (2013 辽宁) 解析：根据前文，此处指Mr. Johnson，故改her为his。 13.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. (2015 陕西) 解析：根据上下文逻辑，此处指“想为教练做点什么特别事情”，而不是“任何事情” ，故改anything为something。 ____ his __________ something 二、从句法设问 检查考生对句子结构、复合句的理解、掌握及运用能力。这类错主要表现为：非谓语动 词的错误，主谓不一致，连词的误用。 Group6 改词类型：动词 1.非谓语动词的错误 14.I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing. (2013 陕西) 解析：因句中已有谓语动词shared了，take应为非谓语动词；又因take与逻辑主语photo 是被动关系，要用过去分词短语作后置定语，故taking应改为taken。 15.Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her copy my answers. (2013 四川) 解析：因本句无谓语动词，asking应为谓语动词，根据上下文时态可知，要用一般过去 时，故改asking为asked。 ____ taken ____ asked 2. 主谓不一致 16.Hard work have made him very ill. (2013 辽宁) 解析：因主语为hard work是第三人称单数形式，故改have为has。 3.时态不一致 17.… by the time I got back, they have finished the scene… (2011 陕西) 解析：因by the time引出的从句中的谓语动词是一般过去时，其后主句 的谓语动词通常用过去完成时，故把have改为had。 ____ has ____ had 三、从行文逻辑设问 检查考生对文章整体结构的理解和逻辑推理能力。考生经常遇到这种情况： 单独看某个句子，很难查出其错误，但上下文联系起来、把前后句结合一起读，才会 发现问题。如：时态不一致、代词所指不一致、句子间转折、因果、并列关系错误等。 Group 7 改词类型： 连词的误用 18.But before long they began to see which was happening. (2012 课标) 解析：see后为宾语从句，从句缺少主语，故用连接代词what. ———— what 19.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go anywhere from the hotel by public transport. (2013 陕西) 解析：改but为so/and, 因前后句是因果或顺承关系而非转折关系。 20. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forgot it.(2015 浙江) 解析：改If为Though/Although, 此处意为“虽然我在那个课室学习时还是个 孩子，但我永远都忘不了它”，表示转折关系而非条件。 —— so/and — Though/Although 短文改错口诀 • 动词形，名词数； 还要注意形和副； 代词格，细领悟；介词短语须关注； 从句非谓要记住；冠词连词常光顾。 Step3我来命题短文改错 命题原则：(每句最多设置两个错误) 四不命题：①单词拼写错误不命题 ② 大小写不命题 ③词序错误不命题（应从错词或少词方面考虑） ④标点符号不命题 五原则：①忠实原文原则（不改变原文的愿意） ②错误以改动最少为原则 ③虚词（冠词、介词、连词、助动词、不定式符号等）以 添加或删除为原则 ④实词（动词、名词、形容词、副词等）以改变形式为原则 ⑤以多改少添加或删除为原则 ①The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . ②They were also the best and worst years in my life . ③At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. ④However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. ⑤They always told me what to do and how to do it. ⑥At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them.⑦ I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. ⑧Now I am leaving home for college.⑨At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help. 对照高考命题点，体会命题原则 ①The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . ②They were also the best and worse years in my life . ③At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. ④However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. ⑤They always tell me what to do and how to do it. _______ ①years 考查名词 _______ ②worst 考查形容词最高级 ③考查固定结构 at first “起初” ———— ④ 考查反身代词 myself _______ ⑤so考查副词 ____ ⑥told 考查动词时态 ⑥At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. ⑦ I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. ⑧Now I am leaving home to college. ⑨At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. _______ ⑦free 考查形容词 be free from “从......释放/解脱” _______ ⑧wearing 考查动名词 by为介词后接动名词 ____ ⑨for 考查固定词组 leave...for...离开......去.... ＾ ⑩ I 考查代词 whenever 引导的时间状语从句缺主语 短文改错口诀 • 动词形，名词数； 还要注意形和副； 代词格，细领悟；介词短语须关注； 从句非谓要记住；冠词连词常光顾。 Step4.完成2015年高考短文改错练习（独立完成） 2015·四川卷 短文改错 Hi, Janice, It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice. Grace 1.考查动词 want的用法 在其后加上to 2.考查动词时态。 tell—told 3.考查名词的复数。friend—friends 4.考查动名词担当宾语。sing—singing 5.考查代词。many—much 6.考查连词。so--but 7.考查疑问词的选择。How—What 8.考查虚拟语气。are—were 9.考查代词。 him—them 10.考查动词 help 去掉with 短文改错口诀 • 动词形，名词数； 还要注意形和副； 代词格，细领悟；介词短语须关注； 从句非谓要记住；冠词连词常光顾。 • 2015年陕西卷 短文改错 • My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. • At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.” • My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! 1.考查介词 去掉in 2.考查代词 anything 改为something 3.考查形容词 better改成best 4.考查动词时态 decide改成decided 5.考查名词. step 改为steps 6.考查副词 well改成good 7.考查连词 after改成when/while 8.考查冠词 a改为the 9. 考查动词不定式 just后加to 10.考查动名词 enjoy改为enjoying