2021 年新高一英语写作押题
前言：根据国家教育部提出“弘扬中华文化，成就立德树人”的教育任务，全国卷英
语命题的方向也随之而变化。人教版新高一的期末考试主要围绕的是第二册和第三册书中的
话题写作进行考察，因此，建议围绕下列话题重点复习：
节日文化（第三册 Unit 1）
参考例题：
【话题 1】
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.
As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country.
Usually, no matter how far away or however busy we are, we will try to come home for the
celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love
most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky,
we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional
activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.
本篇习作一方面很好的完成了写作任务，另一方面在行文过程中能够较为灵活的变换使
用高中阶段的句式结构，给读者留下了深刻的印象。
【积累卡片】
好词：1.share 分享 2 .fall 落下;来临；变成 3.popularity 流行 受欢迎。
好句：
1. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.
我最喜欢的是我们一起赏月的时候。
好处：主语从句的正确使用。
2. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits, sharing
our stories.
一轮明月挂在空中，我们坐在一起吃月饼、品水果、讲故事。
好处：with 结构的正确使用, share 分享。
【话题 2】
China daily 的专栏“Culture issue”就“中国人是否应该过西方节日”举行了一次征稿活动，
你就以下观点进行阐述，并写一篇文稿。
要点如下：1.不足以冲击中国传统文化；2.有利于不同文化的交流；3.
创造交际机会和娱乐氛围。
The celebration of western festivals
Many people are worried that Chinese culture will be ignored or even ruined by celebrating
western festivals. On behalf of the for side, I think that we needn’t be over worried.
Firstly, it does not necessarily ruin Chinese culture. Actually, most Chinese have not ignored
their native festivals. Traditional Chinese festivals still see larger population than western festivals.
Secondly, it is part of global cultural communication. While we are absorbing advanced science
and technology from foreign countries, we are also taking in different cultures. Thirdly, most
Chinese, especially the youth, celebrate western festivals merely out of the wish to connect with
friends and create an entertaining atmosphere.
In a word, while we attach importance to the protection of traditional Chinese culture, we
needn’t worry too much about the celebration of western festivals.
本文习作一方面很好地完成了写作任务，另一方面成功地利用了表示次序的词，显得很
有层次感。语言表达准确、规范、地道。给读者留下了深刻的印象。
【积累卡片】
好词:1.ignore 忽视 2.absorb 吸收
好句：
1. While we are absorbing advanced science and technology from foreign countries, we are also
taking in different cultures.
当我们从国外吸收先进的科学技术的同时，我们也吸收了不同的文化。
好处： absorb 吸收； while 的正确使用。
2. In a word, while we attach importance to the protection of traditional Chinese culture, we
needn’t worry too much about the celebration of western festivals.
总而言之，虽然我们强调保护传统文化的重要性，对西方节日的庆祝也不要过分的担心。
好处：attach importance to...强调......的重要性
历史旅游胜利简介（第三册）
【话题 1】
Now I'll tell you something about Xi'an ， which is a beautiful city belonging to Shaanxi
Province.
Firstly, Xi'an, the capital of thirteen dynasties, is famous in the world.It's a must see for
domestic and overseas visitors. There are many historical relics in Xi'an, such as TerraCotta
Warriors, Big Wild Goose Pagoda, Small Wild Goose Pagoda, wellpreserved city walls from the
Ming Dynasty, and the Bell Tower and Drum Tower.
In addition, you can go to see the other natural sceneries which are also very attractive, such
as Mount Hua, Huaqing Hot Spring, Lishan, etc.
Well, the most attraction of hundreds of local snacks, will make you unable to refuse, of
which the “Shredded pancake in mutton broth” stands out. And the public transport is convenient
for you to reach any places.
In the end，I'm looking forward to your coming to my city one day.
话题高级语言
1．Now I'll tell you something about the greatest places of interest in our town.
现在我来告诉你一些有关我们城镇的名胜景点的事。
2．I'm more than glad to tell you something about the history of our city.
我非常高兴来为你讲述我们城市的历史。
3．Hearing you are coming to the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River，I'm very happy to be
your guide.
听说你们要来长江三峡，我很高兴成为你们的向导。
4．The old town dates back to the late seventeenth century.
这座古城建于十七世纪后期。
5．Guilin，the small city，is unique and like a water colour painting，especially a Chinese
painting，waiting for visitors from all over the world to have a look at it.
桂林，是一个充满水墨色彩的小城，更像一幅中国画，正等着来自全球的游客来参观。
6．Yet in spite of this，you can still find some of the city's grand past.
但是，尽管如此，你还是可以找到一些这个城市辉煌的过去。
7．I'm looking forward to your coming to our city one day.
期望有一天你能来我们的城市。
8．The beautiful town is located along the shore of the lake.
这个美丽的城镇坐落于湖的沿岸。
9．Our new town covers an area of 12，000 mu.with 2 rivers running through it.
我们的新城占地 12 000 亩，有两条河流穿城而过。
【话题 2】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief
introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer
space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of
tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of
the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply
charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice
journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给加拿大网友 Mike 发一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个或
两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Christmas；a brief introduction；places of interest；the Great Wall；one of the greatest wonders
of the world；because of；a lot of；the West Lake；charming；look forward to；there be
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend
to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer
space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists,
scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of
the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a
different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At
last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：and；What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考）
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly
recommend to you.（使用了由 that 引导的定语从句）
[高分句型 2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile
shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.（使用了非谓语动词作状语）
[高分句型 3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible
from outer space.（使用了由 and 连接的并列句）
好词佳句素材参考
一：话题词汇：
1. interesting adj. 有趣的 2. attractive adj. 吸引人的
3. comfortable adj. 舒适的 4. tired adj. 疲倦的
5. satisfied adj. 感到满意的 6. satisfying/satisfactory adj.令人满意的
7. delighted/pleased adj. 感到高兴的 8. impressive adj. 令人印象深刻的
9. popular adj. 受欢迎的 10. convenient adj. 方便的
11. modern adj. 现代化的 12. pleasant adj. 令人愉快的；讨人欢喜的
13. tidy; clean adj. 整洁的;干净的 14. local adj. 当地的
15. friendly adj. 友好的 16. various adj. 各种各样的
17. famous/ well--known adj. 著名的 18. beautiful adj. 美丽的
19. unforgettable adj. 难忘的 20. rich adj. 丰富的、富饶的、富有的
21. breathtaking adj. 惊人的、令人激动的 22. wonderful adj. 精彩的、好极了
23. delicious adj. 好吃的、美味的 24 .impressive adj. 给人深刻印象的
25. fresh adj. 新鲜的、清爽的 26 .familiar adj. 熟悉的
27. colorful adj. 多彩的 28. endless adj. 无穷的、无休止的
29. splendid adj. 辉煌的、灿烂的、极好的 30. peaceful adj. 和平的、平静的
31. airport n. 机场 32.flight n. 航班
二：高级短语
1. a city with a long history 有悠久历史 2. make a trip to 到……旅行
3. take a taxi 乘出租车 4. go sightseeing(去观光)
5.make yourself at home 请随便，别拘束 6. adapt to sth / fit in 适应
7. be famous for 某地因...而闻名 8. be rich/wealthy in 盛产
9. have many tourist attractions to explore 有很多旅游胜地可观看
10. make...one of the most popular cities to visit 使...成为最受欢迎的旅行城市之一
11. convenient transportation 交通便利 12. leave a deep impression on 留下深刻
印象
13. broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野 14. have fun / have a good time 过得愉快
15. be familiar with 对……熟悉 16. relax oneself / feel at ease 放松自己/自在
17. with beautiful scenery 风景优美 18. lie in/be situated in/ be located in 位于
19.pack sth up 将东西装箱打包 20. heavy traffic/ traffic jam 交通堵塞
21.on the way to 在去...的路上 22. settle down 定居、安静下来
音乐与艺术（第二册）
【话题 1】
请你以“Music and Life”为题，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文，要点如下：
1．音乐无处不在，音乐是我们生活的一部分；
2．音乐的种类和形式十分丰富；
3．音乐的功能也是多种的，在不同的场合听不同的音乐，会有不同的心情；
4．我对音乐的感觉。
Music and life
Do you like music? Do you think music is one of the most important parts in your life? Can
you imagine what life will be like without music?
As a matter of fact, music is everywhere and it is part of our life. There are many kinds of
music, such as, classical music, symphony, light music, jazz, rock and roll, disco, folk music, and so
on.
Music, in my mind, is multifunctional. Sometimes it can bring you to a fancy world. Music is
the perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods. Music can not only make
you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm. Above all, music is a universal language.
There is no border between music. Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it
can't still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.
I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my true friends.
【解析】本文属于提纲作文。提纲作文写作技巧：全面审题，确定层次。
1、审题：所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想并围绕中心思想组织材料。
2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架。
3、扩展成文。注意以下方面问题：避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。要灵活
运用各种句式，从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落
有致。用好连接词，做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，前后表达浑然一体。
亮点分析：通过审题可知本文是以“Music and Life”为题，因此所有内容都以音乐与生活
为中心组织材料。在第一段以问句的形式提出问题，更能激起人们的兴趣。第二段，以几个
简单句作为事实从而引出了音乐无处不在的事实，音乐是我们生活的一部分。 并把音乐的
种类和形式作了列举。接着使用一系列的排比句更加确定了音乐的功能是多种多样的，同时
在不同的场合听不同的音乐会有不同的心情，表达的淋漓尽致。在最后一段表达了自己作为
一个音乐爱好者对音乐的感觉。整个文章思路清晰，一气呵成。
总之整个文章句式多变，使用多种复合句。文中运用了 that 引导的定语从句：Music is the
perfect way that you can express your different feelings and moods；由 not only…but also…引导
的并列句，如 Music can not only make you happy, excited, but also make you upset or calm.；由
though 引导的状语从句如：Though sometimes you don't understand foreign language, it can't
still prevent you from feeling the music abroad.。在文章中也使用了许多连接词。如 not
only…but also…，though，I am a super music lover. Music becomes part of my life. It is one of my
true friends.。这一切都增加了文章的可读性。
【话题 2】
你的英国朋友 John 在搞一项调查，介绍世界各地学生所喜欢的音乐形式。他请你介
绍一下中国学生这方面的情况。请你根据以下要点写一封回信：
一、一般情况
学生群体 音乐形式
大部分 流行歌曲（很多歌手、乐队）
部 分 摇滚,爵士乐，乡村音乐等
部 分 古典音乐,民乐等
Chinese students are fond of all kinds of music. Most of us like pop music and like many
famous bands and pop stars such as Coco Lee, Jay Chun, Stefanie Sun, S.H.E．and so on．Some of
us like rock roll and jazz．Some others like classical music and some even like playing traditional
musical instruments. I like both pop music and traditional music．Pop music can bring me both
excitement and lovely tunes．And I can share with my classmates some popular songs．Traditional
music brings me a different pleasure．It can show me the peaceful side of the world and can even
tell me the true meaning of life.
【解析】
试题分析：本文考查提纲式作文。考查此类作文中的不同观点列举型议论文。此类作文通常
以考生面临的几种选择为主题，最终以考生本人的选择和态度归结全文。如果考生的态度是
不明确的，即几种选择各有利弊，则不应该完全肯定某一个事物，也不应该彻底否认某一事
物。考生在说明个人看法且需要论述理由时，要避免简单地重复前面的论据。在写作时，还
需要注意要点的全面性以及语言的准确性。
【亮点说明】本篇习作中，作者对于已给材料描述比较到位，即覆盖所有要点又给出恰当的
补充，如 pop stars such as Coco Lee, Jay Chun, Stefanie Sun, S.H.E．and so on．以及 some even
like playing traditional musical instruments.。这对于考生而言，是值得借鉴的。另外，在说明
自己观点时，并没有局限于一种音乐，而是说明了各种音乐带来的不同感受，避免了观点的
局限性。
考点：考查提纲式作文
【话题 3】
你校为期一周的“校园音乐节”刚结束了，请给学校英语报写一篇短文，介绍本次音乐节，内
容包括：
1.音乐节时间；
2.音乐节主题；
3.音乐节活动。
注意： 1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Campus Music Festival Held
Our school held a campus music festival, which started with an opening ceremony on April 7. The
festival was aimed at making our cultural life colorful, providing opportunities of showing our
talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy". After all, we senior high
students are too tired with long periods of learning, so we need to get relaxed. At the festival there
were musicals and singing contests. There were also music instrument playing contests. The
school music festival was a great success.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生给学校英语报写一篇短文，介绍学校为期一周的“校园
音乐节”。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
开始：begin→start
提供：offer→provide
机会：chance→opportunity
主题：subject→theme
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The festival was aimed at making our cultural life colorful, providing opportunities of
showing our talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy".
拓展句：The festival was aimed at making our cultural life colorful, which provides opportunities
of showing our talents and relaxing ourselves with the theme "Music Makes Us Happy".
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Our school held a campus music festival, which started with an opening ceremony
on April 7. (运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] After all, we senior high students are too tired with long periods of learning, so we
need to get relaxed. (运用了 so 引导的结果状语从句)
好词佳句素材参考
一：词汇
1. program n. 节目
2. entertainment n. 娱乐
3. concert n. 音乐会
4. theater n. 剧院
5. album n. 唱片集
6.. musician n. 音乐师
7.audience
8. relax vt. (使)放松，
9. relaxation n. 放松
10. pop music n. 流 行 音 乐
11. folk music n. 民间音乐
12.. country music n. 乡村音乐
13.hold a concert 举办音乐会
14.on a tour 巡回演出
15.make a hit 大获成功,走红
16.be in fashion 流行
17.give a performance/ performances 演 出
18.play the piano 弹钢琴
二：精品句式
1.Good afternoon, I'd like to say a few words ... 大家下午好，我想要先说几句话……
2.It's an honor to be here ... 很荣幸在这里……
3.Ladies and gentlemen, never before have we had so many different ways to talk to one another.女士们，先生
们，我们彼此交流的途径从未像今天这样多元化。
4.Now we have heard a number of outstanding speeches ...
我们已经聆听了许多精彩的发言……
5.It is now time for us to ... 是时候我们……
6.And I have always wished that ... 我一直希望……
7.Thank you for letting me share this day with me.感谢你们和我共度这一天。
8.Because we wanted the nations of the world, working together, to deal with ...
因为我们希望全世界各国团结起来去应对……
9.And if we do not act ... 如果我们不采取行动……
10.Now, I share the concerns that have been expressed ... 我也同意对于……表达的担心
11.Let us show the world that by working together we can ...
让我们告诉全世界，通过一起努力我们可以……
12.Covering an area of only about 100 square kilometers, the island serves as an important supporting point in
military.
占地仅大约 100 平方公里，这个岛屿在军事方面承担着重要的补给功能的作用。
13.Bordering the USA on the south, Canada faces the Atlantic Ocean on the east, the Arctic Ocean on the north
and the Pacific Ocean on the west.
在南部与美国接壤，加拿大东临大西洋，北靠北冰洋，西濒太平洋。
14.On the one hand, we should keep up our traditional life style.
另一方面，我们应该保留我们的传统生活方式。
15.We should restore and promote this tradition.我们要恢复和发扬这个传统。
16.We hope to see you elaborate and consolidate your tradition.
我们希望看到你们发展和巩固你们的传统。
17.These events changed the course of history.这些事件改变了历史的进程。
18.This region is steeped in tradition.这个地区有着深厚的传统。
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