求助信“金纲”
高考英语作文之“任务写作”
黄金开头句式：
●①I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor.
●我写信是想问您能否帮助我。
●②I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need
your help.
●很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
●③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no
choice but to turn to you for help.
●我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
● (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
● ④I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which
worries me a lot.
● 这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。
● ⑤Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
● 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。
● (3)吸引阅卷人结尾句
● ⑥I would be very grateful if you could help me .../I would appreciate it if you
could do me a favor and ...
● 如果您能帮助我……我会非常感激。
● ⑦I'd appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration/account.
● 如果您能考虑我的请求，我将不胜感激。
金纲七：题型百变
● Ⅱ.下面的考生作文中共有10处语言错误，请改正
● 假定你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。
邮件内容包含：
● 1．吵架的原因；
● 2．吵架后的心情；
● 3．请求Melinda给出解决办法。
● 注意：1.词数100左右；
● 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
● Dear Melinda，
● The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I
need your help now.
● The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at
last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school
while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me
great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt
frustrated ever since.
● I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and
practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.
● Best wishes!
● Yours，
● Li Hua
●答案：
●第一句：writting→writing; because→that
●第二句：去掉was; 去掉at
●第三句：Because后加of
●第四句：caused→causing
●第五句：sincere→sincerely; felt→feeling
●第七句：advices→advice
●第八句：you→your
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