2020-2021学年北师大版必修二Unit5RhythmCommunicationWorkshopWriting

北师大版高中英语导学案 班级： 姓名： 课题 Unit5 Communication Workshop 主备人 课型 写作课 审核人 时间 2021 年 12 月 28 日 领导签字 学习 目标 1. To understand the important sentences. 2. Be able to master the method of writing. 导学过程 笔记 【课前预习与检测】 10min 音乐会评论 佳作观摩 请根据下表提示，以“A Concert Review”为题，写一篇关于音乐会的短文，词数 100 左右。 时间 昨天晚上 主演 Justine 地点 Bournemouth Centre 表演 棒极了 乐团 Elastica, a pop rock group 观众 ①座无虚席，门票抢购一空 ②随歌起舞 ③等待歌手签名 A Concert Review 1 Last night，1,500 young people went to the Bournemouth Centre to see Elastica, a pop rock group with a growing number of fans. ○2 All the tickets were sold out and there was not an empty seat anywhere. ③Elastica played short，3-minute songs•④Justine，the lead singer and guitarist in the group, proved that she’s a true performer. ⑤From the start，the fans were jumping up and down to the rhythm and they did not stop until the very end. ⑥Everyone left the hall feeling excited•⑦ Although it was very cold in Bournerr.onth，a small crowd of fans were waiting outside . ○8 The group happily signed autographs before they got on to their tour bus and left. 【小组讨论分析，教师点拨。】10min 结构分析 第一段点明时间、地点、人物及 Elastica 的受欢迎程度。 第二、三段描写音乐会的热烈场面，重点 描写 Justine 及观众的反应。 第四段写音乐会结束后，歌迷等待签名。 亮点点击 ①句中介词短语作定语，②句 sell out，⑤句 up and down 和 not ••• until 短语，⑥句 中现 在分词短语作伴随状语的运用等均显示出作 者扎实的语言基本功。 ⑤⑦⑧句中状语从句的恰当运用彰显出作者 的语言表达能力。 三．（小组成员展示，总结。）10min （●)技法指导 下面我们就以 3—场音乐会为例，来学习一下写 音乐评论的方法： 第一步:我们要列一列这次音乐会的信息，例如： 音乐会的类型（是摇滚还 是爵士乐）、歌手、乐队、时 间、地点；表演者的演技：音乐、声音及灯光效果； 听众的反应;等等。 第二步:把列举的内容用适当的句型连缀成句， 然后再用适当的连接词连句 成篇即可。 [黄金表达] 1.表示并列：what’s more, in addition，too，as well， besides，furthermore, moreover，what’s worse。 2.表示因果：therefore, for this reason，thus，consequently。 3.表示转折：but，however• on the contrary, instead, on one hand on the other hand。 4.表时间顺序：later, afterwards，from then on， eventually, in the meantime, then，at the same time，after a while，at present，after that，finally。 5.表示列举：first，to begin with，secondly，first of all，then. 四．（当堂训练）10min 请根据以下内容写一篇关于音乐会的短文。 1.2016 年 7 月，中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举 办演唱会。我很幸运买到了一张 票，去听了他的演唱。他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。 2. 虽然天气很热，观众还是很开心。全场欢呼，跟着唱。 3. 周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一，出了很多唱片。 4. 他此次唱了《七里香》《青花瓷》等歌曲。我被他的歌曲深深打动了，盼望 能再次听到他演唱。 参考词汇：周杰伦 Jay Chou《青花瓷》Green Flower Porcelain 《七里香》 Seven Feets Soundly 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 不要逐句翻译 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。 Dear Bob， Thank you for your last letter asking about our library . Yours, Li Hua 五. 【课下作业】 课时跟踪检测, 综合提升板块, 请完成课时跟踪检测(十二)。 参考范文 Jay Chou, whose songs are very popular among young people gave his singing performs nee in Shanghai last year. l was lucky enough to get a ticket. lt was very hot in the summer time, but we had a very good time. Jay Chou, one of the most famous Chinese singe, has made many records. Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio. He sang many well-known songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly. all of which were beautiful and natural. I was deeply impressed by his singing and am looking forward to hearing him sing aga in.