江苏省海安县2020届中考语文专题复习 专题八 写作指导之语言的锤炼学案（无答案）

专题八写作指导之语言的锤炼一、请您写下您平时使用的让文章富有文采的方法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、典型例题1.请您比较，两组句子中哪个句子对景物的描写更为贴切传神,并简述理由？①A：月光如流水一般，照在这一片叶子上。青雾升起在荷塘里。B：月光如流水一般，静静地泻在这一片叶子上。薄薄的青雾浮起在荷塘里。②A:每个晚上，山下亮起灯火，山上闪出灯光。B:每个夜幕深垂的晚上，山下亮起灿烂的万家灯火，山上闪出疏落的灯光。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.请您赏析，本段文字妙处之所在，体会语言的生动性。一张小小的红叶儿,听了狡猾的西风劝告,私下离开母枝出来玩耍,走到半路上,风偷偷儿地溜走了,他便一跤跌在溪水里。溪水是怎样的开心啊,她将那可怜的迷路的小红叶,推推挤挤地推到一个旋涡里,使他滴滴溜溜地打圆转儿；那叶向前不得,向后不能,急得几乎哭出来；水笑嘻嘻，将手一松,他才一溜烟逃走了。____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、巩固练习请您写作，请综合运用锤炼语言的方法，将下列两段文字变得丰富，并使之更有文采。1.春天来了，万物复苏。风儿在吹，雨儿在下，花儿在笑，小溪在流……你听，多美！____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.我们做任何事情，都要有毅力。因为人总有困难。在挫折面前，只有具有毅力，才能成功；如果没有毅力，那就只能失败。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________