专题八 短文改错过专题【五年高考】Correction1(2018课标全国Ⅱ)WhenIwaslittle,Friday’snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.答案 WhenIwaslittle,①Friday’sFridaynightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofall②sortsortsinthesittingroom.As③theakid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedto④watchingwatchthem,myparentswouldnot⑤toletme.Theywouldsayto⑥usmethatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillI⑦∧wasunwillingtoplaythegames⑧forwiththemsometimes.Ididn’trealizehowrightmyparents⑨arewereuntilIenteredhighschool.Thegamesmyparentstaughtme⑩wherewhenIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.Correction2(2018课标全国Ⅲ)ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell.”Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.答案 ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjust①beginbegun.Everyonewassilent,②waitwaitingtoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhis③andorherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeager④∧totakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddone⑤myselfmy/thehomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraid⑥thattospeakinfrontofa⑦largerlargegroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthat⑧includeincludeslearningfromtextbooks,and⑨mistakemistakesaswell.”⑩ImmediateImmediately,Iraisedmyhand.Correction3(2017课标全国Ⅰ)Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,my
mindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.答案 Inthesummerholidayfollowingmy①eighteeneighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhard②∧the/myfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,③sobut/yetonceIstartedthecar,mymind④goeswentblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthe⑤wordwords,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“⑥TurningTurnleft!”Iwasso⑦muchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminutes⑧latelater,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoa⑨suddenlysuddenstopjustinthemiddle⑩onoftheroad.Correction4(2017课标全国Ⅱ)Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!答案 Mr.andMrs.Zhang①allboth/allworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemabout②aan/onehourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyare③interestinginterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,④thatwhichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetup⑤earlierearlyandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsobought⑥forsomegardeningtools.⑦BesideBesides,theyoftengetsomeuseful⑧informationsinformationfromtheInternet.Whensummer⑨camecomes,theywillinvitetheirstudents⑩∧topickthefreshvegetables!Correction5(2017课标全国Ⅲ)WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.答案 WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealize①ofhowfasttimeflies.I②hadhavegrownnotonlyphysically,③andbutalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowas④tooktaken,Ienteredmysecond
yearofhighschooland⑤becomebecameanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmein⑥∧the/thispicturearethethings⑦theythat/whichwereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying⑧differencedifferentkindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthe⑨latelatestmusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesof⑩yourmyhighschooldays.Correction6(2016课标全国Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto①thatwhereIlive.Thoughnotverybig,②buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeven③hadhavetowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessis④honesthonesty.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables⑤orandhighqualityoilare⑥usingusedforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams⑦∧ofbecomingrichin⑧theashortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthat⑨ourhisbusinesswillgrow⑩steadysteadily.Correction7(2016课标全国Ⅱ)Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.答案 Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout①howwhattododuringtheholiday.Wecan②chosechoosebetweenstayingathomeand③taketakingatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortable④butandthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleabout⑤∧theworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden⑥yourourviewandgain⑦knowledgesknowledgewecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwe⑧canshould/cangotoplacesofinterestnearby.I⑨thoughtthinkthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost⑩manymuch,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Correction8(2016课标全国Ⅲ)
Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.答案Theteenage①yearyearsfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestand②worseworstyearsinmylife.At③thefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsby④yourselfmyself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothink⑤suchso.Theyalways⑥telltoldmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbe⑦freelyfreefromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentby⑧wearwearingstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghome⑨toforcollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowhenever⑩∧Ineedhelp.Correction9(2015课标全国Ⅰ)WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.答案 WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①thinkthoughtIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomein②∧thecountryside.Theretheairisclean③orandthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,④onwiththedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave⑤beenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery⑥seriouslyseriousproblem.The⑦airsairwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.⑧MuchManyrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemust⑨foundfindwaystoprotect⑩yourour/theenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.Correction10(2015课标全国Ⅱ)Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.答案Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhis①parentparents.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoy②oninashopwindow.Helikeditso③verymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After④lookslookingatthetoyfor
sometime,heturnedaroundandfound⑤wherethat/wherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredand⑥begunbegantocry.Awomansawhimcryingand⑦tellingtoldhimtowaitoutside⑧atheshop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysaw⑨∧hisparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwere⑩terribleterriblyworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Correction11(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!答案Nearlyfiveyears①beforeago,andwiththehelp②byofourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—forallthese③yearyears—we④hadhavebeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.As⑤∧aresult,theplantsaregrowing⑥somewhereeverywhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyand⑦tastetasty.Thereareso⑧muchmanythatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,⑨but/butyetwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowing⑩wonderfullywonderfultomatoesatnocost!Correction12(2014课标全国Ⅱ)Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.答案Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.①TheyTherearethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.We②didn’tdon’tneedtodoso③manymuchhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime④withforafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalf⑤hourhoursandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.
Mydreamschool⑥looklookslikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsof⑦theflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,or⑧satsitbythelakelistening⑨∧tomusic.Theteachersherearekindand⑩helpfullyhelpful.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Correction13(2016四川)ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother’sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.答案ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,①sobutshehastodomostofthe②houseworkshousework.Sheisagreatmother.BothDad③orandIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.We④getgotupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwent⑤onshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersin⑥herhishand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin⑦∧thekitchen.Thedishes⑧whatthat/which/whatIcookedwereMom’s⑨favoritestfavorite.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother’sDay!”Momwasgratefuland⑩movingmoved.Correction14(2016浙江)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.答案WhenIwasaveryyoung①childrenchild,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyears②latelater.Everytimehearrivedhomeat③∧theendoftheday,we’dgreet④herhimatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowe⑤waswereandpretendnotto⑥knowingknowus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhave⑦hadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilethey⑧chatchatted,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptosit⑨inonthetopofthefridge.Itwasboth⑩excitedexcitingandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Correction15(2015浙江)
Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.答案Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethree①sidesidesoftheclassroomweremade②fromofglass.Ienjoyed③sitsittingclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icould④easyeasilyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroom⑤iswasalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaround⑥themit.Fartherinthedistance,Icould⑦notenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversin⑧∧ahurryinthemorning.Thepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademe⑨feltfeellikeIwasdreaming.⑩IfAlthough/ThoughIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.Correction16(2015陕西)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!答案Mysoccercoachretired①inlastweek.Iwantedtodo②anythingsomethingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthe③betterbestbiscuitsintheworld,soI④decidedecidedtoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasic⑤stepstepsofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereally⑥wellgood.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloor⑦afterwhen/whileIwaspackingthemup.At⑧atheparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjust⑨∧togetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandme⑩enjoyenjoyingthebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Correction17(2015四川)Hi,Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.
AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace答案Hi,Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywant①∧tosharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsI②telltoldyoulasttime,Imadethreenew③friendfriendshere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftime④singsinginginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsme⑤manymuch.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,⑥sobutI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.⑦HowWhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyou⑧arewereme,wouldyoutalkto⑨himthem?Pleasehelp⑩withmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceCorrection18(2014浙江)IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.答案IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.I①hadnoticedthatthecarriagewas②noisenoisyandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspector③comescametocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticket④butandbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearching⑤∧fortheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfrom⑥hisits/theowner.Thepersonwhofound⑦atheticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehad⑧previouspreviouslyspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthe⑨strangersstrangertheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothers⑩oninneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Correction19(2014辽宁)
DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe’vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We’vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o’clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRose答案DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe’vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbothers①tous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We’vecalledseveral②timetimesaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficultto③understandingunderstandwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.Theearlymorningbarking④havehasbeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.⑤BesideBesides,Cleotendstobark⑥aanaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshe⑦startsstartedbarkingevenbefore5o’clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhow⑧closelyclosethehousesare.Weappreciate⑨ouryourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigure⑩∧outagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRoseCorrection20(2014四川)Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don’tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit’safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.答案Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalk①withaboutwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarm②gogoesoff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwait③∧foryourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherand④classmateclassmates.Don’tpanicorgetoutofline,and⑤tryingtrytoremainquietand⑥calmlycalm.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputout⑦athefire.Ifit’safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwilllead⑧usyoubacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethat⑨whensomeoneismissing⑩andorhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.【三年模拟】每篇建议用时:8分钟
A组 2017—2019年模拟·基础题组Correction1(2019届福建泉港一中、南安国光中学期中联考)Ofmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhomakesanimpressionofme.Thoughheis50,butheappearsveryyoung.Undoubtedly,he’soneofthemostpopularteacherinourschool.Comparingwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhispointofview,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”.Consequently,insteadofgivingusimmediatelyanswers,heisalwaysencouragedustothinkbyhimselfwheneverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,we’vemaderapidprogresses,learninghowtoanalyzeandsettledproblems.Whatwonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!答案 Ofmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhomakesanimpression①ofonme.Thoughheis50,②butheappearsveryyoung.Undoubtedly,he’soneofthemostpopular③teacherteachersinourschool.④ComparingComparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhispointofview,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”.Consequently,insteadofgivingus⑤immediatelyimmediateanswers,heisalways⑥encouragedencouragingustothinkby⑦himselfourselveswheneverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,we’vemaderapid⑧progressesprogress,learninghowtoanalyzeand⑨settledsettleproblems.What⑩∧awonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!Correction2(2019届湖北孝感一中、应城一中等五校期中联考)Oneofmyfriendshavesentmeashortmessage,saythattruefriendsareonesoulintwobodies,whichmovesmeverymuchandmakesmethinkhowtruefriendshipis.Nowadays,thewordfriendshiphasbeenusedveryoftenthatithaslostitsmeaning.Somejokinglyputitthatfriendsaremadetobetakenadvantage.Inmyopinion,truefriendshipdoesn’tmeanthatwhenyouneedyourfriendshelp,you’lltreatthemtodinner.Truefriendshipisthecommunicationoftheheartsandunderstandofthesouls.Truefriendskeepyouinthemind,nomatterwheretheyare.Onceyouhavefoundsuchtruefriends,dotreasurehim.Withfriendship,lifeproveshappilyandharmonious.答案 Oneofmyfriends①havehassentmeashortmessage,②saysayingthattruefriendsareonesoulintwobodies,whichmovesmeverymuchandmakesmethink③howwhattruefriendshipis.Nowadays,thewordfriendshiphasbeenused④verysooftenthatithaslostitsmeaning.Somejokinglyputitthatfriendsaremadetobetakenadvantage⑤∧of.Inmyopinion,truefriendshipdoesn’tmeanthatwhenyouneedyour⑥friendsfriends’help,you’lltreatthemtodinner.Truefriendshipisthecommunicationoftheheartsand⑦understandunderstandingofthesouls.Truefriendskeepyouin⑧themind,nomatterwheretheyare.Onceyouhavefoundsuchtruefriends,dotreasure⑨himthem.Withfriendship,lifeproves⑩happilyhappyandharmonious.Correction3(2019届湖北宜昌示范高中协作体期中)Swimmingismyfavoritesport.IusuallyswimsinaswimmingpoolclosetothatIlive.Yesterday,myfriendTonyandIdecidetogoswimminginthesea.ItturnedouttobeoneofthemostexcitingexperiencesIhadever
had.Atfirst,seenthewavescomingoneafteranother,Iwasafraid.ThoughIwasnotabadswimmerintheswimmingpool,butswimmingintheseawasdifferent.IwasjustabouttogiveitupwhileIsuddenlynoticedalittleboywalkingtowardstheseacalm.Weakasheseemed,hewentstraightintotheseawithanyhesitation.Encouragedbyher,Iovercamemyfearandfinallymadesuccessfulattempt.答案 Swimmingismyfavoritesport.Iusually①swimsswiminaswimmingpoolcloseto②thatwhereIlive.Yesterday,myfriendTonyandI③decidedecidedtogoswimminginthesea.ItturnedouttobeoneofthemostexcitingexperiencesIhadeverhad.Atfirst,④seenseeingthewavescomingoneafteranother,Iwasafraid.ThoughIwasnotabadswimmerintheswimmingpool,⑤butswimmingintheseawasdifferent.Iwasjustabouttogiveitup⑥whilewhenIsuddenlynoticedalittleboywalkingtowardsthesea⑦calmcalmly.Weakasheseemed,hewentstraightintothesea⑧withwithoutanyhesitation.Encouragedby⑨herhim,Iovercamemyfearandfinallymade⑩∧asuccessfulattempt.Correction4(2019届湖南浏阳六校期中联考)OneMondayafternoon,wewereplayingbasketballinplaygroundwhileIsuddenlyslippedandfellover.Onseeingthat,allmyclassmatesrushedtome.Underthehelpofseveralotherstudents,LiXiang,oneofmybestfriendputmeonhisbackandheadtofortheclinicimmediately.ItturnedoutthatmyrightanklegotinjuredbutIhadtobesenttohospital.Hedidnotleaveuntilanambulancearrived.Thefollowingday,hecametoseeme.Tomygreatlyrelief,hebroughttextbookstothemandhelpedmewithmylessons.Itwasagreatpleasuretohavesuchadevotingfriend.答案 OneMondayafternoon,wewereplayingbasketballin①∧theplayground②whilewhenIsuddenlyslippedandfellover.Onseeingthat,allmyclassmatesrushedtome.③UnderWiththehelpofseveralotherstudents,LiXiang,oneofmybest④friendfriendsputmeonhisbackand⑤headheaded⑥tofortheclinicimmediately.Itturnedoutthatmyrightanklegotinjured⑦butand/soIhadtobesenttohospital.Hedidnotleaveuntilanambulancearrived.Thefollowingday,hecametoseeme.Tomy⑧greatlygreatrelief,hebroughttextbooksto⑨themmeandhelpedmewithmylessons.Itwasagreatpleasuretohavesucha⑩devotingdevotedfriend.Correction5(2019届福建长汀一中等六校联考)Recentlymanyschoolshavetakenuptoughmeasurestoforbidstudentstobringtheirsmartphonestoschool.Therefore,somestudentsbreakthisruleandsomeevenplaywiththeirsmartphonesinclassandthatmakestheteachersdiscouraging.Thedisadvantagesofstudentsbringingsmartphonestoschoolisobvious.Ontheonehand,smartphonescandistractstudents’attentions.Onotherhand,somestudentsmaygetaccessforsomeunhealthywebsites,whichdoesharmtotheirdevelopment.What’sbad,somestudentsarelikelytocomparethebrandsoftheirsmartphoneswiththeirclassmates’.Inmyopinion,Istrongsupportbanningsmartphonesinschools.Onlybythismeanscanyoudevotemoreenergiestoourstudyandachieveourgoals.
答案 Recentlymanyschoolshavetaken①uptoughmeasurestoforbidstudentstobringtheirsmartphonestoschool.②ThereforeHowever,somestudentsbreakthisruleandsomeevenplaywiththeirsmartphonesinclassandthatmakestheteachers③discouragingdiscouraged.Thedisadvantagesofstudentsbringingsmartphonestoschool④isareobvious.Ontheonehand,smartphonescandistractstudents’⑤attentionsattention.On⑥∧theotherhand,somestudentsmaygetaccess⑦fortosomeunhealthywebsites,whichdoesharmtotheirdevelopment.What’s⑧badworse,somestudentsarelikelytocomparethebrandsoftheirsmartphoneswiththeirclassmates’.Inmyopinion,I⑨strongstronglysupportbanningsmartphonesinschools.Onlybythismeanscan⑩youwedevotemoreenergiestoourstudyandachieveourgoals.Correction6(2018福建漳州二次调研)IamsogladyoucanvisitmeinLondon.Knowingthatyou’venevertraveloutsideofAsia,I’dtellyouabitaboutyoucanexpecttofind.WhenIfirstarrived,IfoundthatLondonissuchainternationalcity.TherearemanyChineserestaurants,soBritishpeoplehardlyeatChinesefoodforbreakfast.Mostofthemgetusedtobaconoreggwithafewslicesoftoast.Tippingalwayspuzzlesme.Ifyouwanttoavoidtogettingconfused,youshouldalwaysleave10%ofthebilltotheservice.Besides,it’sverydifficultforourChinesetounderstandBritishhumour.Sodon’tbesurprisedwhenyoudon’tthinkanythingisfunny.ThemajorityofBritishpeopleisfriendly.Anyway,Iamsolookingforwardtoyourvisitthere.答案IamsogladyoucanvisitmeinLondon.Knowingthatyou’venever①traveltraveled/travelledoutsideofAsia,I’dtellyouabitabout②∧whatyoucanexpecttofind.WhenIfirstarrived,IfoundthatLondonissuch③aaninternationalcity.TherearemanyChineserestaurants,④sobutBritishpeoplehardlyeatChinesefoodforbreakfast.Mostofthemgetusedtobaconor⑤eggeggswithafewslicesoftoast.Tippingalwayspuzzlesme.Ifyouwanttoavoid⑥togettingconfused,youshouldalwaysleave10%ofthebill⑦tofortheservice.Besides,it’sverydifficultfor⑧ourusChinesetounderstandBritishhumour.Sodon’tbesurprisedwhenyoudon’tthinkanythingisfunny.ThemajorityofBritishpeople⑨isarefriendly.Anyway,Iamsolookingforwardtoyourvisit⑩therehere.Correction7(2018安徽合肥二次质检)LastSaturdayourclasswenthikinginacountryside.Wemeetatourschoolgateandsetoffat8:00am.Ontheway,weweresingingandlaughinghappilywhileagirlsuddenlyfellintoadeephole.Shefeltsofrighteningandevenburstintotears.Oneofmyclassmatefoundalongropeandwefinallygothimout.Fortunately,shedidn’tsufferseriouslyinjuries,butitseemedthatherankleslightlytwisted.Wemanagedtosendinghertothenearesthospital.Itisanexperiencewe’llneverforgetit,thoughwedidn’tenjoyourselvesverymuchthatday.答案LastSaturdayourclasswenthikingin①athecountryside.We②meetmetatourschoolgateandsetoffat8:00am.Ontheway,weweresingingandlaughinghappily③whilewhenagirlsuddenlyfellintoadeephole.Shefeltso
④frighteningfrightenedandevenburstintotears.Oneofmy⑤classmateclassmatesfoundalongropeandwefinallygot⑥himherout.Fortunately,shedidn’tsuffer⑦seriouslyseriousinjuries,butitseemedthatherankle⑧∧wasslightlytwisted.Wemanagedto⑨sendingsendhertothenearesthospital.Itisanexperiencewe’llneverforget⑩it,thoughwedidn’tenjoyourselvesverymuchthatday.Correction8(2018河南新乡二模)MyfriendandIalwaysplayedoutdoorwhenwewereyoung.Duringspringrains,weclimbeduptoourcomforttreehouseandplayedcards.Thenintheamusedautumn,werolledaroundintheorangeleaf.Thisallendoneday,whenmyfriendreceivedvideogameplayerforhisbirthday.Inthebegin,hesometimesinvitedmeovertoplaywithhim.Butthisbegantohappenlessandless,becauseofhishousewassmall,andhismotherdidn’tlikevisitors.Nowweneverseeeachanother,asheisalwaysplayedhisvideogames.Imissmyfriend.答案MyfriendandIalwaysplayed①outdooroutdoorswhenwewereyoung.Duringspringrains,weclimbeduptoour②comfortcomfortabletreehouseandplayedcards.Theninthe③amusedamusingautumn,werolledaroundintheorange④leafleaves.Thisall⑤endendedoneday,whenmyfriendreceived⑥∧avideogameplayerforhisbirthday.Inthe⑦beginbeginning,hesometimesinvitedmeovertoplaywithhim.Butthisbegantohappenlessandless,because⑧ofhishousewassmall,andhismotherdidn’tlikevisitors.Nowweneverseeeach⑨anotherother,asheisalways⑩playedplayinghisvideogames.Imissmyfriend.Correction9(2017四川宜宾二诊)DearEditor,I’maseniorhighschoolstudent,namedLiHua.Nowadays,itwasfashionableforusstudentstohaveiPads.UsinganiPad,youcanlistentomusic,downloadlearningmaterials,andsoon.Obvious,itgreatlyhelpsusatourstudies.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,thatmakesteachersandotherstudentsannoying.Someofthemevenwastetimeplayvideogamesinclass.Inmyopinions,theclassroomisaplacetostudyin.Therefore,weshouldmakeagooduseofiPadstoimproveourstudies.Meanwhile,schoolsshouldmakesomerulesinstructthestudentstouseiPadsproperly.答案DearEditor,I’maseniorhighschoolstudent,namedLiHua.Nowadays,it①wasisfashionableforusstudentstohaveiPads.UsinganiPad,②youwecanlistentomusic,downloadlearningmaterials,andsoon.③ObviousObviously,itgreatlyhelpsus④atwithourstudies.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,⑤thatwhichmakesteachersandotherstudents⑥annoyingannoyed.Someofthemevenwastetime⑦playplayingvideogamesinclass.
Inmy⑧opinionsopinion,theclassroomisaplacetostudyin.Therefore,weshouldmake⑨agooduseofiPadstoimproveourstudies.Meanwhile,schoolsshouldmakesomerules⑩∧toinstructthestudentstouseiPadsproperly.Correction10(2017山东枣庄一模)Itismygrandfather’seightybirthdaytoday.Asusual,allmyfamilygottogethertocelebratehim.Weboughthimalotofpresent,andmyfatherpreparedabigbirthdaycake.Atthedinnerparty,wesingtheHappyBirthdaysong.Hemadeawishhappybeforeheblewthecandlesout.Withasurprisegift,Icookedadishforhim!AsIhadnevercookedbefore,hewassosurprisedthatthedishwasserved.Mygrandfathersaidthatitwasthebetterbirthdaygifthehadreceived.Actually,mymotherhelpedmecookeditandIhadbeenpracticedforseveraldays.答案Itismygrandfather’s①eightyeightiethbirthdaytoday.Asusual,allmyfamilygottogethertocelebrate②him/himit.Weboughthimalotof③presentpresents,andmyfatherpreparedabigbirthdaycake.Atthedinnerparty,we④singsangtheHappyBirthdaysong.Hemadeawish⑤happyhappilybeforeheblewthecandlesout.⑥WithAsasurprisegift,Icookedadishforhim!AsIhadnevercookedbefore,hewassosurprised⑦thatwhenthedishwasserved.Mygrandfathersaidthatitwasthe⑧betterbestbirthdaygifthehadreceived.Actually,mymotherhelpedme⑨cookedcookitandIhad⑩beenpracticedforseveraldays.B组 2017—2019年模拟·提升题组Correction1(2019届湖南三湘名校教育联盟一次联考)LastSunday,myfamilywentforwalkinanearbypark.Wewantedtobreathethefreshairandhavingfunthere.However,whengoingout,wefinditwascloudyandsmoggy.Onlyafewpeoplewerewalkingquickonthestreetswearingtheirmasks.Iwaswonderingwhywasthematterwhenmylittlebrotherbegantocoughloudly.SuddenlyIrealizedthatitwasairpollution.Sowehadtogotohomethatday.Smokefromcars,buses,andfactoriesmaketheairdirty,thatisharmfultoourhealth.Ithinktheyshouldalldosomethingtokeeptheairclean.答案 LastSunday,myfamilywentfor①∧awalkinanearbypark.Wewantedtobreathethefreshairand②havinghavefunthere.However,whengoingout,we③findfounditwascloudyandsmoggy.Onlyafewpeoplewerewalking④quickquicklyonthestreetswearingtheirmasks.Iwaswondering⑤whywhatwasthematterwhenmylittlebrotherbegantocoughloudly.SuddenlyIrealizedthatitwasairpollution.Sowehadtogo⑥tohomethatday.Smokefromcars,buses,andfactories⑦makemakestheairdirty,⑧thatwhichisharmfultoourhealth.Ithink⑨theyweshouldalldosome⑩thingthingstokeeptheairclean.Correction2(2019届安徽皖南八校一次联考)Manyachildtakewhattheirparentsdoforthemforgranted.Theyhaven’trealizedthemeaningofbegrateful.Buttheyalwaysgetangrywiththeirparentsbecausetheydon’tgetwhattheywant.Myfriendoncetoldmethenewsthatalittlegirlwentoutofthehouseandrefusetoreturnhomeasherparentsdidnotgiveherenough
money.Iwassoshockingtohearit.IwouldneveraskmuchfrommyparentsbecauseIknewitwasnoteasyforhimtomakealiving.AndIalwaysfeelsothankfultowhattheyhaveofferedtome.IfsomeonewhogivesmeahandwhenIaminneed,IwillrememberhimandifIhaveachance,Iwillpayhimback.Inshort,itisagratefulheartmakesusbecomingkindpeopleandcreateaharmoniousenvironment.答案 Manyachild①taketakeswhattheirparentsdoforthemforgranted.Theyhaven’trealizedthemeaningof②bebeinggrateful.③ButAnd/Sotheyalwaysgetangrywiththeirparentsbecausetheydon’tgetwhattheywant.Myfriendoncetoldmethenewsthatalittlegirlwentoutofthehouseand④refuserefusedtoreturnhomeasherparentsdidnotgiveherenoughmoney.Iwasso⑤shockingshockedtohearit.IwouldneveraskmuchfrommyparentsbecauseIknewitwasnoteasyfor⑥himthemtomakealiving.AndIalwaysfeelsothankful⑦toforwhattheyhaveofferedtome.Ifsomeone⑧whogivesmeahandwhenIaminneed,IwillrememberhimandifIhaveachance,Iwillpayhimback.Inshort,itisagratefulheart⑨∧thatmakesus⑩becomingbecomekindpeopleandcreateaharmoniousenvironment.Correction3(2019届福建安溪一中、养正一中、惠安一中、泉州实验中学期中)Ihaveaoldersister.HernameisMonica.Heisveryprettyandsmart,withlongblackhairandbigeye.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpmeandlookafterme.Butshewasusedtobeeasytogetangry,especiallythatshewaswithfamilymembersonly.OnceItalkedtoherthisproblem.Feelingterriblesorry,sheagreedwithmebutpromisedtomakeachange.Shealsothankedmeformakingherawareofherproblem.Shehadmadehugeprogressonthatbadhabitsofar.NowIlikeherevenmoreandIamgladIhavesoagreatsister.答案 Ihave①aanoldersister.HernameisMonica.②HeSheisveryprettyandsmart,withlongblackhairandbig③eyeeyes.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpmeandlookafterme.Butshe④wasusedtobeeasytogetangry,especially⑤thatwhenshewaswithfamilymembersonly.OnceItalkedtoher⑥∧aboutthisproblem.Feeling⑦terribleterriblysorry,sheagreedwithme⑧butandpromisedtomakeachange.Shealsothankedmeformakingherawareofherproblem.She⑨hadhasmadehugeprogressonthatbadhabitsofar.NowIlikeherevenmoreandIamgladIhave⑩sosuchagreatsister.Correction4(2019届吉林省重点中学二次联考)Growingup,Ididn’thavemuchambitionandIwaswastedalotoftimeonvideogames.Oneday,Ipickedupabook,thatwasaboutsevenhabitsofhighlysuccessfulteenagers.Wedon’tremembermuchaboutthestory,andonekeyconceptthattrulyimpressedmewastheideaoftime.Thebookstressedtheimportanceofuseourtimewisely.DuringthattimeIwasaimlessperson.Itsoundedcrazily,butIdeterminedtoreadit.AfterIreadit,Imakeadecisiontospendingasmuchtimeaspossiblejustreading.I’vemadegreatprogressessincethen.答案
Growingup,Ididn’thavemuchambitionandI①waswastedalotoftimeonvideogames.Oneday,Ipickedupabook,②thatwhichwasaboutsevenhabitsofhighlysuccessfulteenagers.③WeIdon’tremembermuchaboutthestory,④andbut/yetonekeyconceptthattrulyimpressedmewastheideaoftime.Thebookstressedtheimportanceof⑤useusingourtimewisely.DuringthattimeIwas⑥∧anaimlessperson.Itsounded⑦crazilycrazy,butIdeterminedtoreadit.AfterIreadit,I⑧makemadeadecisionto⑨spendingspendasmuchtimeaspossiblejustreading.I’vemadegreat⑩progressesprogresssincethen.Correction5(2019届安徽江淮十校二次联考)MissZhangisoneofmymostfavoriteteachers.Shehasaslimbuildandalwaystieshishairinaponytail.Sheis35,butshelooksquiteyoungatherage.WhichimpressesmemostisMissZhang’swayofteaching.Shedevotesherselftoteachandprepareswellforeveryclass.Notonlydidshehelpustounderstand“what”,butsheexplores“why”.Sheencouragesustothinkindependentandhavediscussionsamongourselveswhenwefacedwithproblems.Sheissuchainspiringpersonwithastrongsenseofresponsibilities,andweallrespectandadmireher.答案 MissZhangisoneofmy①mostfavoriteteachers.Shehasaslimbuildandalwaysties②hisherhairinaponytail.Sheis35,butshelooksquiteyoung③atforherage.④WhichWhatimpressesmemostisMissZhang’swayofteaching.Shedevotesherselfto⑤teachteachingandprepareswellforeveryclass.Notonly⑥diddoesshehelpustounderstand“what”,butsheexplores“why”.Sheencouragesustothink⑦independentindependentlyandhavediscussionsamongourselveswhenwe⑧∧arefacedwithproblems.Sheissuch⑨aaninspiringpersonwithastrongsenseof⑩responsibilitiesresponsibility,andweallrespectandadmireher.Correction6(2018江西赣州3月模拟)MynameisLiMing,astudentstudiedinGanzhouNo.18MiddleSchool.IameagerbecomeavolunteerinyourgroupandIcanworktillmynexttermbegins.Ihavearealtalentonsinging.Igetfirstprizeinthesingingcompetitioninourschoollastyear.However,Icanteachchildrenhowtosingsongs.Besides,Iplaythepianoverywell,thatwillhelpalotinmywork.Iamwarm-heartedandalwaysbereadytohelp.Helpingotherpeoplemakesmyselfhappy.IbelieveIcanmakefriendwiththechildren.IhopeIamfortunatelyenoughtobeamemberofyourgroup.答案MynameisLiMing,astudent①studiedstudyinginGanzhouNo.18MiddleSchool.Iameager②∧tobecomeavolunteerinyourgroupandIcanworktillmynexttermbegins.Ihavearealtalent③onforsinging.I④getgotfirstprizeinthesingingcompetitioninourschoollastyear.⑤HoweverTherefore/Thus,Icanteachchildrenhowtosingsongs.
Besides,Iplaythepianoverywell,⑥thatwhichwillhelpalotinmywork.Iamwarm-heartedandalways⑦bereadytohelp.Helpingotherpeoplemakes⑧myselfmehappy.IbelieveIcanmake⑨friendfriendswiththechildren.IhopeIam⑩fortunatelyfortunateenoughtobeamemberofyourgroup.Correction7(2018安徽江南十校3月联考)Itisnodoubtthatweproducelotsofgarbageeveryday.However,fewpeoplehavethehabitofsortingwaste.Thiswillbringlotsofproblem.First,thevalueofthingsthatcanberecycledorreused,suchasplasticandpaper,arereduced.Besides,dealwithsomewastebyburningitwillcauseseriousenvironmentallypollution.Forthesereasons,thegovernmentshouldtakeeffectivelymeasurestocallforwastesorting.Morepublicitycampaignsandpublicserviceadvertisementsshouldruntoraisepublicaware.Thegovernmentcanalsodesignthecolorfulgarbagecanswithclearwaste-sortingimagesonittoencouragepeopletosortwaste.答案①ItThereisnodoubtthatweproducelotsofgarbageeveryday.However,fewpeoplehavethehabitofsortingwaste.Thiswillbringlotsof②problemproblems.First,thevalueofthingsthatcanberecycledorreused,suchasplasticandpaper,③areisreduced.Besides,④dealdealingwithsomewastebyburningitwillcauseserious⑤environmentallyenvironmentalpollution.Forthesereasons,thegovernmentshouldtake⑥effectivelyeffectivemeasurestocallforwastesorting.Morepublicitycampaignsandpublicserviceadvertisementsshould⑦∧beruntoraisepublic⑧awareawareness.Thegovernmentcanalsodesign⑨thecolorfulgarbagecanswithclearwaste-sortingimageson⑩itthemtoencouragepeopletosortwaste.Correction8(2018山西二模)Mymumisavolunteerinahospital.ShebroughtdinnereverySundaytothepeopleattendingtheirrelativeswhoareinhospital.OneSunday,Mumaskedmetohelpherwithdinner.Atthefirst,Ididn’twantto,sointheendshepersuadedmetogo.Halfanhourlate,wearrived.Wequicklysetupatableandstartedgivingpeoplefood.Thepeopleservingthereweredeeplymovedandshowedourgratefulness.Itwasamazedtolookatpeople’sface,especiallythoseofchildren.Itmademefeelgladlyforbeingthere.ThatdayIrealizedthatthevalueoflifeisnotonlyaboutreceiving,butgivingaswell.答案Mymumisavolunteerinahospital.She①broughtbringsdinnereverySundaytothepeopleattending②∧totheirrelativeswhoareinhospital.OneSunday,Mumaskedmetohelpherwithdinner.At③thefirst,Ididn’twantto,④sobutintheendshepersuadedmetogo.Halfanhour⑤latelater,wearrived.Wequicklysetupatableandstartedgivingpeoplefood.
Thepeople⑥servingservedthereweredeeplymovedandshowed⑦ourtheirgratefulness.Itwas⑧amazedamazingtolookatpeople’s⑨facefaces,especiallythoseofchildren.Itmademefeel⑩gladlygladforbeingthere.ThatdayIrealizedthatthevalueoflifeisnotonlyaboutreceiving,butgivingaswell.Correction9(2017江西八所重点中学4月联考)LastnightIwasatacoffeeshop.Therewasawonderfullymusicshow.AsIgotuptogetacupofcoffeeandacookie,Inoticeamiddle-agedwomannearme.Clearly,shehadcaughtinafireofsomekind.Hisfacewassobadlyburnedthatshelookedverytight.Ithoughtabouthowbraveshewastocomeoutbutappearinpublic.WhenIreturnedbacktomyseat,Iturnedtowardsthewomanandsaid,“Isn’theawonderfulperformers?”AndIgaveherthelargestsmileIwasabletogive.Tomypleased,shelookedrightatmeandgavemeahugesmileforreturn.Itwashersmilewhichmadeherwholefacelightuplastnight.Shewasbeautiful.答案LastnightIwasatacoffeeshop.Therewasa①wonderfullywonderfulmusicshow.AsIgotuptogetacupofcoffeeandacookie,I②noticenoticedamiddle-agedwomannearme.Clearly,shehad③∧beencaughtinafireofsomekind.④HisHerfacewassobadlyburnedthatshelookedverytight.Ithoughtabouthowbraveshewastocomeout⑤butandappearinpublic.WhenIreturned⑥backtomyseat,Iturnedtowardsthewomanandsaid,“Isn’theawonderful⑦performersperformer?”AndIgaveherthelargestsmileIwasabletogive.Tomy⑧pleasedpleasure,shelookedrightatmeandgavemeahugesmile⑨forinreturn.Itwashersmile⑩whichthatmadeherwholefacelightuplastnight.Shewasbeautiful.Correction10(2017河北衡水中学下学期期中)Iscreativityanaturalgiftlikegoodlooks,orisitsomethingthatitcanbeacquiredlikeknowledge?Ifweanalyzethecreativeprocesscareful,wemightknowwhatitisandwhatitmightwork.Thecreativeprocesshasalwaysacceptedasthesourceofallimportantworksinthearts,soweshouldnotthinkthecreativityplaysaroleonlyinthearts.Everymajorscientificdiscoverbeginswithsomeoneseeingtheworlddifferentlyfromthewayothersseesit.Andthisiswhichcreativityisallabout—imaginingtheworldinthenewway.Weallhavethepotentialtoimaginetheworldinanabsolutelynewway.Infact,wearebornforit.答案Iscreativityanaturalgiftlikegoodlooks,orisitsomethingthat①itcanbeacquiredlikeknowledge?Ifweanalyzethecreativeprocess②carefulcarefully,wemightknowwhatitisand③whathowitmightwork.Thecreativeprocesshasalways④∧beenacceptedasthesourceofallimportantworksinthearts,⑤sobutweshouldnotthinkthecreativityplaysaroleonlyinthearts.Everymajorscientific⑥discoverdiscoverybeginswithsomeoneseeingtheworlddifferentlyfromthewayothers⑦seesseeit.Andthisis⑧whichwhatcreativityisallabout—imaginingtheworldin⑨theanewway.Weallhavethepotentialtoimaginetheworldinanabsolutelynewway.Infact,weareborn⑩forwithit.
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