2020届浙江省各地高二下学期期末英语联考试题写作专题

1 2020 届浙江省各地高二下学期期末英语联考试题写作专题 01【慈溪市 2019-2020 高二下期末】 第一节 应用文写作（满分 15 分） 46.假定你是李华，你校即将举行“给农村小学捐书”（Donating Books to Rural Primary School)活动，现向全 校招募志愿者，你的笔友 Peter 来信向你咨询有关情况，请你写一封回信，要点如下： 1.简单介绍该项活动； 2.志愿者所需条件. 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, Delighted to receive your letter inquiring something about Donating Books to Rural Primary School,I am writing to inform you of some detailed information. The activity is aimed to make the students in rural primary schools have access to various kinds of books,which can not only broaden their horizons,but also cultivate their capability of thinking and learning independently.Additionally,the volunteers should be diligent,responsible and warm-hearted.He or she must be good at communicating with others and the one who has previous experience will be preferred. If you have any question about this project,please contact me without any hesitation. Yours sincerely 2 Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的笔友 Peter 写一封回信，内容针对你校在即将举行的“给农村小 学捐书”活动中向全校招募志愿者一事给予答复。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：一般现在时 结构：三段式。 第一段：提出写信目的（tell some detailed information）； 第二段：介绍该活动及志愿者所需条件（introduction） 第三段：可随时联系及咨询（contact）。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） delighted to,aim to, not only…but also…, additionally, be good at, without any hesitation 第三步：连词成句 1. I am writing to inform you of some detailed information. 2. The activity is aimed to make the students in rural primary schools have access to various kinds of books,which can not only broaden their horizons,but also cultivate their capability of thinking and learning independently. 3. Additionally,the volunteers should be diligent,responsible and warm-hearted. 4. He or she must be good at communicating with others and the one who has previous experience will be preferred. 5. If you have any question about this project,please contact me without any hesitation. 3 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用很多较好句式，如：The activity is aimed to make the students in rural primary schools have access to various kinds of books,which can not only broaden their horizons,but also cultivate their capability of thinking and learning independently.该句中使用了非限制性定语从句，并在从句部分包含 not only…but also 句型；If you have any question about this project,please contact me without any hesitation.该句使用了 if 引导的 条件句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明， 上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 第二节 概要写作（满分 25 分） 47.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Artificial intelligence(AI)teachers can provide customized teaching for students to meet their unique requirements through analyzing data and deep learning.In the future, they may replace human teachers for basic teaching tasks.Since some students may find it and put new power into traditional teaching patterns.An educational system providing customized teaching centered on students represents the future trend of AI education. China's AI education has developed rapidly in recent years with the rise of several thousand relevant companies.Currently,AI teachers are able to help students leamn pronunciation,analyze their condition,guide them to learn independently,and even grade writing assignments. Some foreign AI educational systems have been introduced into several domestic schools and have worked well on trial. However,the promotion of AI education is still facing several difficulties in practice such as low technological levels,inadequacy of data and lack of funds.AI education still depends largely on human teachers' work.Most importantly,it conflicts with current educational patterns because the courses developed by foreign countries are not suitable for Chinese exam-oriented education.Teachers may also find it hard to change their original roles in classrooms since easing control on classes may make them seem irresponsible.These problems 4 need to be handled before the mass promotion of Al education. With AI teachers,the original teacher-centered classes will be transformed into student-centered ones where teachers only organize the class and provide guidance.Since teachers are supposed to not only equip students with knowledge but also shape their values and help them develop creative abilities,AI teachers will not replace human teachers but will only pose higher requirements of teaching.A combination of AI teachers and human ones can create the best future for Al education. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】AI teachers catering for students’ personalities can provide students with personalized teaching to meet their needs. China has seen rapid development in AI education in the past years. But many practical problems should be solved before its wide application. Despite the advantages of AI teachers, human ones will never be replaced; instead, both will play their joint roles in the future teaching. The function of AI teachers – the development of AI teachers – the problems of AI teachers before wide application – the role of human teachers with the application of AI teachers 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达是概要写作。要求概括针对学生个性的人工智能教师能够为学生提供个性化的教学，来满足 学生的需求。中国在过去几年，人工智能教育发展迅速。但是很多实际问题在其广泛应用之前需要解决。 尽管人工智能教师有其优点，但是人类教师永远不会被取代。相反，二者将会在未来的教学中共同发挥作 用。 【详解】写作之前要认真阅读原材料，加深理解。 遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要的主题、标题、细节进行概括，全面清晰的表明原文信息。 5 给摘要起一个好标题，如：可以采用文中的主题句。 写作过程中，注意词数在 60 词左右，同时使用自己的语言，不要照抄原文语句。 02【衢州市 2019-2020 高二下期末】 第一：应用文写作（满分 15 分） 46.假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Tom 一起参观校园摄影作品展（photography exhibition).请给他写封邮件， 内容包括： 1. 展览时间、地点； 2. 展览内容、意义； 3.表达期待。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom, Learning you have a keen interest in taking photos, I am writing to invite you to attend the photography exhibition to be held in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. next Sunday. In the exhibition, you can enjoy the pictures varying from students' school life to fantastic views of our campus. There many photography lovers will be present, with whom you can communicate and share your experience. I am sure you will have a great time there. Looking forward to your favorable reply. Yours 6 Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇应用文。 【详解】第 1 步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封信; 假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Tom 一起参观校园摄影作品展 （photography exhibition).请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 展览内容、意义；3.表达期 待。 第 2 步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: have a keen interest in 非常感兴趣；fantastic views 美丽风景； varying from …to 从…到…的变化；looking forward to 期待； favorable reply.佳音；communicate and share 沟通和分享等。 第 3 步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观 的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如 Learning you have a keen interest in taking photos, I am writing to invite you to attend the photography exhibition to be held in our school lecture hall at 9 a.m. next Sunday.非谓语动词结构的运用；以及定语从句的使用 There many photography lovers will be present, with whom you can communicate and share your experience. 全文中没有中 国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章 增色添彩。 第二节：读后续写（满分 25 分） 47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Jason looked out the window of the school bus.Normally,he liked to count the number of dogs he saw on the way to school.They always looked so happy on their morning walks.But today was different. Jason had a test. 7 Jason had never taken a test before. He had heard about them, but tests were for big kids.Though now that he was in second grade,his teacher announced that the whole class would take a spelling test.She stood in front of the whole class and told everyone at once in a loud,clear voice.She explained that to do well on the test,the students would have to memorize their spelling words and rewrite them without any mistakes. This made Jason feel very nervous.What would happen if he made a mistake? He was pretty good at spelling,but sometimes words sounded different than they looked.He practiced all of the words five times each last night.He hoped it was enough. When Jason got to school,he didn't feel well.His stomach hurt.Jason went straight to the nurse's office,but the nurse told Jason that he wasn't sick. “Sometimes when you're nervous or scared, it can make your tummy hurt,” the nurse said. “Try taking some deep breaths to relax.And good luck on your test!” And with that,the school nurse sent Jason to class. “Oh,good!”Jason's teacher said when he walked in the door."I'm glad you're here.We were just about to start the test."She handed Jason a piece of paper.It was numbered one to ten,but had no other writing on it. Jason put his name at the top like he always did.Then the teacher said"Number one:friend."The students were supposed to spell the word"friend”in the first blank space.Jason did his best. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: He hoped that he didn't mix up the "i" and the "e" in the word "friend". ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 8 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Before long, it was over. Jason's stomach didn't hurt any more either. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】He hoped that he didn't mix up the “i” and the “e” in the word “friend”. Having carefully checked the word, he was fully convinced that there would be no mistake. A little bit delighted as he felt, a sense of nervousness swiftly seized him. He was anxious about the spellings of the remaining words. His stomach hurt again. All of a sudden, he remembered the advice of the nurse. Taking a few deep breaths, Jason managed to calm himself and began to listen to his teacher attentively. Miraculously, all the spellings streamed into his mind one after another. Before long, it was over. Jason’s stomach didn’t hurt any more either. After he handed in the paper, he couldn’t wait to open his book and surprisingly and he found all his spellings correct. Several minutes later, his teacher announced the result of the test. No doubt he ranked No. 1. On hearing it, he jumped with joy, waves of pride running through his body. His hard practice paid off. On the bus home, he saw those lovely dogs again. As usual, he began to count them happily. 03【金华十校联考 2019-2020 高二下期末】 第一节 应用文写作 46.假定你是李华，得知你校外籍学生 George 想加人学校某一社团（club).请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐社团；2.推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1.词数 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】One possible version: 9 Dear George, I'm Li Hua. Hearing that you plan to join a club in our school, I'm writing to recommend to you the choral club. Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs. Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture. Wish you a rosy experience in the club you like! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封电子邮件，是一封推荐信。 【详解】第一步：假定你是李华，得知你校外籍学生 George 想加人学校某一社团（club).请你给他写一 封邮件，内容包括：1.推荐社团；2.推荐理由；3. 表达祝愿。 第二歩：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。 第三步：根据提纲依次写出推荐社团；推荐理由和 表达祝愿。内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如 plan to， recommend to，have a better command of…not only…but also 等等。 第四步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。 【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。 第二段，写出推荐社团,推荐的理由并且表达祝愿，Besides…连接结构的短语和词运用得体恰当。 第三段，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。 文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如 10 where 引导的定语从句 Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese songs. 非谓语动词和并列句 Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.彰显作者高水平的英语驾 驭能力。 第二节 概要写作 47.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。 Diet Coke, diet Pepsi, diet pills, no-fat diet, vegetable dict...We are surrounded by the word" diet" everywhere we look and listen. We have so easily been attracted by the promise and potential of diet products that we have stopped thinking about what diet products are doing to us. We are paying for products that harm us psychologically and physically. Diet products significantly weaken us psychologically. On one level, influenced by diet products, people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet. Diet products make us Jump over the thinking stage and go straight for the scale(秤）instead. All we have to do is to recognize the word" diet" in food labels in the supermarket. On another level, diet products make people believe that gain comes without pain, and that life can be without resistance and struggle. For example, every time we have a zero-calorie drink, we are telling ourselves without our awareness that we don't have to work to get results. The danger of diet products lies not only in the psychological effects they have on us, but also in the physical harm that they cause. Diet foods can indirectly harm our bodies because consuming them instead of healthy foods means we are preventing our bodies from having basic nutrients. Diet foods and diet pills contain zero calorie only because the diet industry has created chemicals to produce these wonder products. Diet products may not be nutritional, and the chemical that go into diet products are potentially dangerous. Now that we are aware of the effects that diet products have on us, it is time to seriously think about buying them. Losing weight lies in the power of minds, not in the power of chemicals. Once we realize this, we will be much better able to resist diet products, and therefore prevent the potential harm that comes from using them. 【 答 案 】 Nowadays we are obsessed with diet products, which turn out both physically and psychologically harmful(要点 1).First, we are tempted into paying more attention to our physical weight than eating habits(要点 11 2).People also tend to believe losing weight is effortless, thus causing psychological harm(要点 3).Second, diet products bring about physical harm, for what they contain are not nutrients but potentially dangerous chemicals(要点 4).Accordingly, we should think twice before purchasing diet products and try to say goodbye to them(要点 5). 04【浙南名校联盟 2019-2020 高二下期末】 第一节 应用文写作 (满分 15 分) 66. 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Gary 即将回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。请你给他写一 封邮件，向他推荐一个或两个礼物。内容包括: 1. 推荐礼物； 2. 推荐理由。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Gary, Learning that you are planning to bring home some gifts representing Chinese culture, I’m pleased to offer my suggestions. Personally, I believe green tea is an ideal choice, through which your mum can get a good taste of the typical Chinese lifestyle. Besides, the Chinese knot, a decoration found almost everywhere in China, can be an appropriate alternative too. Your wishes of reunion and good luck can be perfectly conveyed through its red 12 threads knitted together. Hopefully, the information above will be of some help to you. Yours, Li Hua 第二节 读后续写(满分 25 分) 67. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs - one for Pa, one for Ma, and one for me. I tried not to look at Pa’s empty place. Pa had gone to the city to look for work. He had been gone for a long time. Every night, lying awake in bed, I waited for the train to stop, waited for the sound of his work boots dropping on the step, and waited for his voice calling, “I’m home!” Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains Ma made from empty flour sacks (面粉袋). Sometimes the train stopped - for someone else’s Pa coming home. Not mine, not yet. Every night, Ma came to kiss me good-night - after the train had gone by. She had been listening, too. “Go to sleep. Your Pa’ll be home soon. Maybe for Thanksgiving.” How could I be thankful without my Pa? I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my head, whispering, “Maybe tomorrow, maybe tomorrow.” One morning, the smell of coffee woke me. I ran into the kitchen. There he was! Pa lifted me onto his shoulders. “How’s my boy? You’ve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up anymore.” He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOUR. I tried reading the other: S-U-G-A-R. Pa whistled admiringly and winked (眨眼) at me. Ma didn’t say no when Pa sprinkled (撒) a bit of that precious white sugar on my bread. Ma said, “I’m going to bake a pie for your Pa’s homecoming dinner. Go downstairs, Jimmy, and bring me that jar of apples.” She smiled at me with a “mind now” look. 13 There was no need. I knew how to be careful. It was the last jar - the one we had been saving and saving to welcome Pa home. “When Pa comes home, there’ll be apple pie.” I could hardly remember what pies tasted like. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: I took the steps two at a time. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ______ Paragraph2: Seeing this, I felt like crying. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ______ 【答案】Paragraph 1: I took the steps two at a time. I stood on tiptoes to take down the jar. With both my hands around it, I hurried upstairs, thinking fondly of the delicious taste. Suddenly, my bare feet caught on the middle one. Losing balance, I 14 reached out my hands to steady myself, but in vain. The jar slipping through my fingers, it smashed on the hard-as-rock mud floor. Bits of apple flew everywhere. A river of glass glittered up at me. Paragraph 2: Seeing this, I felt like crying. “The last jar!” I should have been more careful. Hearing the sound, Ma and Pa raced down the stairs. “Are you hurt?” Ma asked anxiously. I raised my teary eyes and apologized in a choked voice. “Never mind. Son, accidents happen.” Pa winked at me, “What about a sugar pie?” Back to the kitchen, we baked the sugar pie together for Thanksgiving dinner, with a sweet atmosphere floating around us. 05【宁波九校联考 2019-2020 高二下期末】 第一节：应用文写作（满分 15 分） 假定你是学生会主席李华，在高三毕业前夕邀请你们学校的外籍家长来校参加毕业典礼，请你 写一封电子邮件，内容要点如下： 1.毕业典礼时间地点； 2.主要安排。 参考词汇：文凭：diploma 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Father/Mother, __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【答案】 15 第二节：读后续写（满分 25 分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The family had just moved to Rhode Island,and the young woman was feeling a little sad on that Sunday in May.After all,it was Mother's Day----and 800 miles separated her from her parents in Ohio. She had called her mother that morning to wish her a happy Mother's Day,and her mother had mentioned how colorful the yard was now that spring had arrived.As they talked,the younger woman could almost smell the tantalizing aroma of purple lilacs(紫丁香）hanging on the big bush outside her parents' back door. Later,when she mentioned to her husband how she missed those lilacs,he popped up from his chair.＂I know where we can find you all you want,"he said."Get the kids and come on."So off they went, driving on the country roads of northern Rhode Island.Eventually,he stopped the car. “Come with me,"he said.“Over that hill is an old cellar hole,and there are lilacs all around it.Go pick a few.” There,on the top of the hill,were the towering lilacs bushes.While the man examined the cellar hole and tried to explain to the children what the house must have looked like,the woman had been cheered up, drifting among the lilacs.Carefully,she picked some out.She was in no hurry,admiring each blossom as a rare and delicate treasure. Finally,though,they returned to their car for the trip home.When they were almost home,she suddenly shouted to her husband:"Stop the car.Stop right here!” In a second,the woman was out of the car and hurrying up a nearby grassy slope with the lilacs still in her arms.At the top of the hill was a nursing home and,because it was such a beautiful spring day,the patients were outdoors,walking with relatives or sitting on the_porch(走廊）。 注意： （1)所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 16 （2)至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语： （3)续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； （4)续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The young woman went to the end of the porch,where an elderly patient was sitting in her wheelchair, alone. Paragraph 2: Curiosity was aroused among the kids and the husband. 【答案】