命题探索
分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“校园生活”这
一话题,近10年并未考查。
分析全国近年真题可知,“校园生活”属于高频话题,关于此话
题通常有以下命题角度:①初中生活中难忘的人或事;②介绍初中三
年的收获与遗憾;③介绍学校生活;④介绍校园课外活动或特色课程,
如阅读、剪纸、画画和发明等;⑤校园劳动教育的建议。
教材链接
人教教材中涉及“校园生活”话题的单元具体如下(可参考对应教
材单元记背优秀文段):
写作角度 年级、单元(Unit) 话题(Topic)
介绍学校生
活
七(上)Unit 1 My name's Gina. Making new friends
七(上)Unit 9 My favorite subject is science. School subjects
七(下)Unit 3 How do you get to school? Transportation
九(全)Unit 14 I remember meeting all of
you in Grade 7. School days
介绍丰富的
校园活动
七(下)Unit 1 Can you play the guitar? Joining a club
七(下)Unit 11 How was your school trip? School trip
重读教材词句段
词汇短语导图
【好句积累运用】
1. When I started school here, my Chinese was not good.(扩写具体事例)
[外研九(下)Module 8 P66]
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________
教材好句佳段
角度 1 初中生活中难忘的人或事
When I started school here, my Chinese was not good, and some of
my mistakes were very funny.
2. I am very busy on school days. I have some free time on weekends.
(用but连接) [人教七(下)Unit 8 P48]
______________________________________________________________
__________
3. 李老师对我们的学习要求很严格,但他总是鼓励我们、支持我们。
(be strict about...)[上海牛津七(下)Unit 1 P3]
______________________________________________________________
________________
I am very busy on school days, but I have some free time on
weekends.
Mr Li is strict about our studies, but he always encourages us and
gives us support.
【经典语段再现】[人教八(下)Unit 10 P78]
①_____________________(时光飞逝)! My junior high school life is
coming to an end. ②____________________[加入时间状语], my teachers
and classmates have helped me a lot.
I still remember that Ms. Lee was always ③_________________ (对……
有耐心) me in math class. She helped me to work out the answers no
matter how difficult they were.
I really appreciate all the teachers. I ④________________(计划)
get each of them a card and a gift to say thank you.
How time flies
In the past three years
patient with
plan to
【好句积累运用】
4. I've become good at speaking English.(用比较级升格)[人教九(全)
Unit 14 P108]
_____________________________________________________________
角度 2 介绍初中三年的收获与遗憾
I've become much better at speaking English.
5. Our teachers and parents will be proud of us.(扩写原因)[人教九(全)
Unit 14 P111]
_____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________
6. 很遗憾我没有充分利用我的空闲时间来提升我的英语口语。(It's a
pity that...)
_____________________________________________________________
______________________
Our teachers and parents will be proud of us because we have
grown up and can be responsible for ourselves.
It's a pity that I haven't made full use of my free time to improve
my spoken English.
【经典语段再现】[冀教九(全)Unit 14 P152]
Time has gone by quickly. Three years has already passed. You
had valuable experiences in the past and you have ⑤________________
(更光明的未来) ahead of you.
⑥____________[加入频度副词] life is not easy. No matter how
high you rise, there will be times when you ⑦____________(跌倒).
brighter futures
Sometimes
fall down
⑧____________[加入衔接词] this happens, remember this: there is no
such thing as true failure. Failure is an opportunity to try something
new. ⑨__________________________________[续写面对失败的正确态
度]. Remember to be brave.
When
Pick yourself up and take a new road
【好句积累运用】
7. Pupils in England do not sit in row in the classroom.(用instead升格)
[外研九(下)Module 2 P11]
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________
角度 3 介绍学校生活
Pupils in England do not sit in row in the classroom. Instead, they
sit around tables.
8. We always have a big sports meet twice a year. (扩写具体项目)[冀教
七(下)Unit 3 P34]
_____________________________________________________________
______________
We always have a big sports meet twice a year. I often take part in
the long jump.
【经典语段再现】[人教七(上)Unit 9 P53]
I am very busy on Friday. At 8:00 I have math. It is not fun. The
teacher says it is useful, ⑩ _________ [加入衔接词] I think it is difficult.
Then at 9:00 I have science. It is difficult but interesting. At 10:00 I
have history.
but
After that, I have P.E. at 11:00. It is easy ⑪____________[加入衔接
词] fun. Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00, and after that we have
Chinese and art lessons. ⑫_________________(多么繁忙的一天)!
and
What a busy day
【好句积累运用】
9. During the Reading Week, we can borrow more books from the
school library. We can bring in books and magazines from home.(用not
only...but also...升格)[译林牛津八(上)Unit 2 P20]
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
角度 4 介绍校园课外活动或特色课程
During the Reading Week, we can not only borrow more books from
the school library but also bring in books and magazines from home.
10. In the US, students often have a school dance. The school dance is
set up to celebrate the end of junior high.(用定语从句升格)[外研九(下)
Module 8 Unit 3 P71]
_____________________________________________________________
_______________________________
In the US, students often have a school dance that/which is set up to
celebrate the end of junior high.
【经典语段再现】[上海牛津七(上)Module 4 P110]
Yesterday was Show and Tell Day at Daniel's school.
Daniel was the first student to speak. He showed his classmates an
old stamp. “My father gave me this first stamp ⑬____________[加入
定语从句的关系词] has a picture of an old Chinese stone bridge on it.”
said Daniel.
that
“⑭___________________________________________(这让我对中国
文化更感兴趣). Soon I started to look for more stamps with interesting
pictures. I learnt a lot about our country and its great culture from the
stamps!⑮ __________________(收集邮票) is really educational.”
This made me more interested in Chinese culture
Collecting stamps
【好句积累运用】
11. I really like the project of planting trees.(扩写好处)[冀教八(下)Unit
2 P20]
_____________________________________________________________
___________________
角度 5 校园劳动教育的建议
I really like the project of planting trees. It's also a good way to
learn about nature.
12. The Labour Practice Week is very meaningful and colorful.(扩写具
体内容)[2020烟台真题范文]
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
13. 我们学生应该尽可能避免使用塑料袋来减少白色污染。(as possible
as) [2020柳州真题范文]
_____________________________________________________________
__________________________
The Labour Practice Week is very meaningful and colorful,
including many activities like the beauty of the school environment,
work on the practice base and speeches on labour.
We students should avoid using plastic bags as possible as we can to
reduce the white pollution.
【经典语段再现】
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some
basic life skills at school every week. ⑯____________[加入衔接词], we
can take part in outofclass activities such as planting trees or growing
vegetables ⑰________________________[续写活动目的].
Secondly
to enrich our experience
Also, we need to try to ⑱_________________________(做一些家务) at
home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes.
⑲____________(最重要的是), we can form good working habits and
value the importance of working hard through our experience.
do some chores/housework
Above all
典例剖析
批 注 审 题 (5定审题)
要求:(1)短文须包括上述的两个提示要点和一个补充要点。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the
education of middle school and primary school in China. ___________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
列 提 纲 写 句 子
列提纲 写句子
开头:点明主题
(已给出)
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the
education of middle school and primary school in China.
正文:阐述劳动教
育课的意义以及在
学校开展劳动教育
课的建议
劳动教育的意义:①②劳动教育很重要,能学到生活技能,
培养好习惯(important; learn life skills; form/develop good
habits)
____________________________________________________
对在校园内开展劳动教育的建议:③学校可以给我们提供
一些机会来学习基本生活技能(offer chances; basic life skills)
____________________________________
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则,表达正确)
列提纲 写句子
正文:阐述劳动
教育课的意义以
及在学校开展劳
动教育课的建议
④学校可以成立一些俱乐部(set up)
________________________________________________________
⑤学校也可以举办一些比赛(hold competitions)
________________________________________________________
劳动教育活动对我们的影响: ⑥让校园生活更加丰富多彩并且有
意义(make; colorful and meaningful)
__________________________________
结尾:表达期待
⑦我很期待在新学期开设这门课程。(hope to)
_____________________________________
普通范文 我来提升
It's reported that Labor Education will be
included in the education of middle school and
primary school in China. ①I think it's important.
②We can learn some life skills and form good
habits. Both will help a lot in the future.
一、让词汇更高级
1. offer chances→___________
____________________
2. hope to take→
__________________________
成 篇 章 (注意衔接连贯)
provide/give
chances/opportunities
look forward to taking
普通范文 我来提升
As for how to run the course in our
school, I have some ideas. ③The school
can offer chances to teach us some
basic life skills. ④What's more, the
school can set up some clubs. ⑤The
school can also hold competitions to
help students develop their interest.
二、让句式丰富多彩
3. 合并句子①和②
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
______________________________
4. 扩写目的升级句子④
_____________________________________
_____________________________________
I think it's important for us to learn
some life skills and form good
habits/because we can learn some life
skills and form good habits.
What's more, the school can set up some
clubs to enrich students' outdoor activities.
普通范文 我来提升
⑥Such activities make our school
life more colorful and meaningful.
⑦I hope to take the course in
the new term. I believe I will do
well in it.
5. 用so that升级句子⑤
________________________________________
________________________________________
__________
【温馨提示】提升完成后,请务必在自己的练
习本上完整誊写一遍最终的升级范文。
The school can also hold competitions so that
students have chances to develop their
interest.
(2020广州改编)今天的英语课上,你们班级举行了“我送过的一
份珍贵的礼物”为主题的分享活动。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四
人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
学以致用
From Bob Kate Lily You
To parents good friend foreignteacher (请补充)
What
soup photo album paper cutting
(请补充)
Why thanksand love friendship culture (请补充)
要求: (1)短文须包含三个所列要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
写 作 三 步 曲
【批注审题】5定审题
【列提纲、写句子】注意人称、时态及其他语法规则
【成篇章】注意衔接连贯
In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I
gave.”Here is what we shared in our group.
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______________________________________________________________
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___________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In
his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love
to his parents. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends
because she wanted to cherish every moment with her or him, hoping
that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign
teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese
culture.
_________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
For me, what I gave to my grandparents was a smartphone. We
don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each
other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone.