命题探索
分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“传统节日”这
一话题,在2014年以“介绍传统节日的基本信息”这一角度考查了
“介绍中秋节的时间以及人们如何庆祝”。
分析全国近年真题可知,全国关于此话题的命题角度还有:庆祝
传统节日的方式(活动)、谈论传统节日的意义及感受等。
教材链接
人教教材中涉及“传统节日”话题的单元具体如下(可参考对应教
材单元记背优秀文段)
写作角度 年级、单元(Unit) 话题(Topic)
传统节日的基本
信息、庆祝方式、
意义
九(全)Unit 2 I think that
mooncakes are delicious.
Festivals
重读教材词句段
词汇短语导图
【好句积累运用】
1. The new year is a time for cleaning and washing away bad things.
Then you'll have good luck in the new year. (用It's time to do sth.升格)
[人教九(全)Unit 2 P10]
_____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________
教材好句佳段
角度 1 传统节日的基本信息
It's time to clean and wash away bad things when the new year is
coming. Then you'll have good luck in the new year.
2. Mooncakes look like a full moon on the MidAutumn night. They
carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss. (用in the shape
of升格) [人教九(全)Unit 2 P11]
______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
3. The Spring Festival is very important in my country.(扩写具体信息)
[外研七(上) Module 10 P62]
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________
Mooncakes are in the shape of a full moon on the MidAutumn
night. They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss.
The Spring Festival is very important in my country. It usually falls
in February, but sometimes it falls in January.
【经典语段再现】[译林牛津七(上)Unit 5 P78]
The Spring Festival is ①_________________________________(最
重要的节日之一)in China. Most Chinese families celebrate it. It always
falls in January or February. ②________________[加入衔接词] it is
often cold at this time of year, people are happy. Family members get
together and then have a big dinner. ③__________________________
___________[续写人们的活动]. There is a great Spring Festival Gala on
TV every year.
one of the most important holidays
Though/Although
After dinner, people like to
watch TV
Children ④____________________________________________(玩
得很开心) on this day. We get presents. Usually our parents get new
clothes and packets ready for us, and we get ⑤ ____________(压岁钱)
from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles. We like to
⑥______________(放烟花) at night. ⑦_______________________(它们
是多么美妙啊)!
have fun/enjoy themselves/have a good/great time
lucky money
let off fireworks How wonderful they are
【好句积累运用】
4. The Chinese people here always have a party to celebrate Chinese
New Year.(用in order to/so as to升格)[译林牛津七(上)Unit 5 P64]
_____________________________________________________________
_______________________________
角度 2 庆祝传统节日的方式(活动)
The Chinese people here always have a party in order to/so as to
celebrate Chinese New Year.
5. During the MidAutumn Festival, all my family get together and have
a big dinner. (扩写具体事例)[译林牛津七(上)Unit 5 P57]
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
During the MidAutumn Festival, all my family get together and
have a big dinner. Then we eat mooncakes and enjoy the full moon.
【经典语段再现】[人教九(全)Unit 2 P11]
Chinese people have been celebrating the MidAutumn Festival
and ⑧_________________________(吃月饼) for centuries. Mooncakes
are in the shape of a full moon on the MidAutumn night. People think
⑨____________[加入宾语从句的引导词] mooncakes can carry their
wishes to the families they love and miss.
eating/enjoying mooncakes
that
⑩_________ [加入时间介词] the story of Chang'e, people started
the tradition of ⑪_________________(赏月) and sharing the mooncakes
with their families.
After
admiring the moon
【好句积累运用】
6. The Spring Festival is a time for family reunion. It has a special
meaning to every one of us.(用定语从句升格)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________
角度 3 谈论传统节日的意义及感受
The Spring Festival is a time for family reunion, which has a special
meaning to every one of us.
7. Although they live far, young people go back home with gifts to visit
their parents, expressing their love and showing their respect to
them.(用no matter how升格)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
______________________
8. Traditional festivals are part of culture.(扩写具体感想)
_____________________________________________________________
_________________________
No matter how far they live, young people go back home with gifts
to visit their parents, expressing their love and showing their
respect to them.
Traditional festivals are part of culture, so I believe it is everyone's
duty to pass them on.
【经典语段再现】
On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the
dinner. There are ⑫___________________________________(各种各样
的美食和饮料). Many of them usually have great meanings. For
example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, ⑬________
[加入定语从句的引导词] means“having more luck and becoming
better” in Chinese pronunciation.
all kinds of delicious food and drinks
which
Another dish is fish, which means “having more than we need”.
Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive
⑭____________(不但) best wishes ⑮____________(而且) lucky money
from their parents.
not only but also
典例剖析
批 注 审 题 (5定审题)
要求: (1)邮件须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头和结尾已
给出,不计入总词数。
(3)词数:80个左右。
参考词汇: the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon, the
symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)
列 提 纲 写 句 子
列提纲 写句子
开头:引出主题
(已给出)
Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning
Chinese cooking.
正文:询问Tony学
习中式烹饪的情况
并回答邮件中Tony
提出的问题
关于中式烹饪:①你为什么喜欢它?(like)
____________________________________________________
②你是如何学习它的?你会做什么菜呢?(cook)
____________________________________________________
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则,表达正确)
列提纲 写句子
正文:询问Tony
学习中式烹饪的
情况并回答邮件
中Tony提出的
问题
③希望下次可以品尝到你做的菜。(hope; dish)
________________________________________________________
介绍中秋节:④它是在农历的八月十五日。(the lunar calendar)
________________________________________________________
⑤它是中国最重要的节日之一。(one of the...)
________________________________________________________
列提纲 写句子
正文:询问Tony
学习中式烹饪的
情况并回答邮件
中Tony提出的
问题
⑥所有的家人在那天聚在一起并享用一顿丰盛的晚餐。(get
together; have a big dinner)
________________________________________________________
⑦晚上我们通常吃月饼并赏月。(eat moon cakes; watch the moon)
________________________________________________________
普通范文 我来提升
Hi, Tony,
Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're
learning Chinese cooking. ①Why do you like it?
②How are you learning it? And what can you cook?
③Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!
一、让词汇更高级
1. like→_______________
2. watch the
moon→_________________
成 篇 章 (注意衔接连贯)
be interested in
admire the moon
普通范文 我来提升
Yes, we really have MidAutumn
Festival. ④It's on August 15th of
the lunar calendar. What's more,
⑤it's one of the most important
festivals in China. ⑥All the family
members get together and have a
big dinner on that day.
二、让句式丰富多彩
3. 用“fall on”升格④
________________________________________
4. 用“no matter whether they are busy or not”
升格⑥
________________________________________
________________________________________
_____________________________
It falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar.
All the family members get together no matter
whether they are busy or not to have a big
dinner on that day.
普通范文 我来提升
⑦We usually eat moon cakes and
watch the moon at night. We
believe the full moon is the symbol
of reunion.
Bye for now,
Li Hua
5. 用“while”升格⑦
________________________________________
________________________________
【温馨提示】提升完成后,请务必在自己的练
习本上完整誊写一遍最终的升级范文。
We usually eat moon cakes while admiring
the moon at night.
中国的文化源远流长,我们有众多的节日,比如春节、元
宵节、清明节……,每一个节日的背后都是中华五千年文明的体现,
假如你是李华,请根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的
中国传统节日。
提示: (1)What's your favorite festival?
(2)Why do you like it?
(3)How do you celebrate it?
学以致用
要求: (1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
写 作 三 步 曲
【批注审题】5定审题
【列提纲、写句子】注意人称、时态及其他语法规则
【成篇章】注意衔接连贯
Among all the festivals,____________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
I love this festival best for two reasons. First, it is a time for family
members to get together, so I can meet many relatives and friends
during the festival. Second, I can get lucky money from my parents and
relatives. I always spare part of the money to help others. I think it is
quite meaningful and it makes me happy.
I usually celebrate this festival by visiting relatives and friends.
What's more, I always buy a plant at the beginning of the new year and
try to look after it well—it's my special way to celebrate the festival.
I love the Spring Festival best.