Try To Write Beautiful
Compositions!
Use of the mobile phone
• send messages
• contact others
• play games
• surf online
• take photos
• watch films
• listen to music
• … …
We can use it to …
Troubles
Troubles
be bad for our health
may not focus on…
ring, cause him nervous
disturb others
search for answers on it ,
affect our studies
it is easy to lose
… …
Should the students use the
mobile phone at school?
活动
主题
汤老师做了一个报告。全班同学讨论了使用手
机的利与弊。
活动
收获
中国拥有世界上最多的手机。
利 可随时随地与人联系， 。。。（另举至少一
个优点）
弊 它有害于健康，（另举至少一个缺点）
活动
感受
。。。
题材、人称、时态、要点 Brainstorm!
Part 1: (instruction)
Part 2: (body)
Part3: (conclusion)
Should the students be allowed to bring the mobile phone?
a person /
a thing I /we/you/he/she…V/Vs/Ved/will+V…
给我们做了一个报告
discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
the mobile phone
讨论了手机的利与弊
give us a report
中国有最多的手机
Introduction Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Main body
Conclusion
可随时随地与人联系（contact)
。。。 。。。
有害于健康
。。。 。。。
have the most the mobile phones
contact people at anytime and in anyplace
……
……
be bad for health
•英语句子的翻译步骤——
• Step 1:找出主干(who-do-what)
discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of the mobile phone
give us a report
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
have the most the mobile phones
contact people at anytime and …
……
……
be bad for health
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Ms Tang gave us a report.
we discussed about the advantages
and disadvantages of the mobile phone.
Last Monday we held an activity about whether
the students should use the mobile phones. Ms
Tang was invited to give us a talk. After her
speech, we had a discussion about the advantages
and disadvantages of the mobile phone.
巧用连词多变句式
主题句
•英语句子的翻译步骤——
Step 1:找出主干(who-do-what)
Try to translate the sentences
into English in your test paper!
一、多变句式原则
三、主题句原则
二、巧用连词原则Step 2:添枝加叶
添枝加叶
一、多变句式原则
三、主题句原则
二、巧用连词原则
It is not only easy but also fast.
It makes our life more convenient(方便的）and comfortable.
If you go shopping in this way, you will spend a few minutes
choosing the things .
you will spend a few minutes choosing the things that you need.
1、It is easy. It is fast.（not only…but also）
2、It is more convenient and comfortable.（make sth. adj）
3、You go shopping in this way. You will spend a few minutes
choosing the things（if）
4、You will spend a few minutes choosing the things.
We need the things. (定语从句)
You can shop at home instead of going out.
5、You can shop at home. You don’t go out. (instead of)
online stores can provide various goods for us.
Besides, we can save much money by shopping online .
6、There is various goods in online stores. (provide sth. for sb.)
7、而且，我们可以通过网购节省很多钱。（by doing sth.）
Though online shopping has a good effect on our life, its
disadvantages are obvious, too.
8、Online shopping has a good effect on our life. Its disadvantages are
obvious, too. (though)
It’s very easy for us to buy goods different from the pictures
we see on the Internet.
What’s worse, we may easily lose our personal information.
9、We can easily buy goods different from the pictures we see
on the Internet.( it is adj. for sb. to do sth.)
10、跟糟糕的是，我们很容易丢失个人信息。(what’s worse,+句子)
In order not to be cheated, we ought to be more careful.
There is no doubt that shopping online has brought us
many advantages.
We can make the best use of it in our daily life.
Only in this way can we achieve a balance between our study and
hobbies.
11、We ought to be more careful not to be cheated. (in order not to do)
12、online shopping has brought us many advantages .
(there is no doubt that)
13、我们可以在日常生活中充分利用好它。(make the best use of…)
14、We can achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
(only in this way+倒装句)
With the development of the Internet, many people are used
to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some
students also join the group.
It is not only easy
but also fast. It has made our life more convenient(方便的）and
comfortable. If you go shopping in this way, you will spend a few
minutes choosing the things that you need instead of going out.
On the other hand, online stores can provide various goods for us.
Besides, we can save much money by online shopping.
Though online shopping has a
good effect on our life, its disadvantages are obvious, too. It’s very
easy for us to buy goods different from the pictures we see on the
Internet. What’s worse, we may easily lose our personal
information. In order not to be cheated, we ought to be more
careful.
There is no doubt that shopping online has brought us many
advantages. We can make the best use of it in
our daily life. However, we can’t lose ourselves in it. Only in this
way can we achieve a balance between our study and hobbies.
Shopping online has many advantages.
Every coin has two sides .
In my opinion,
discuss the advantages and
disadvantages of the mobile phone
give us a report
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
have the most the mobile phones
contact people at anytime and …
……
……
be bad for health
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
Last Monday we held an activity
about whether the students should use
the mobile phones. Ms Tang was
invited to give us a talk. After her
speech, we had a discussion about the
advantages and disadvantages of the
mobile phone.
Para1.(列词块、变句式）
use the cell phones (宾语从句)give a report ( 被动语态)；
have a discussion about….(after)
Para1.(谋句成篇）
Last Monday we held an activity about whether the
students should use the mobile phones. Ms Tang was
invited to give us a talk. After her speech, we had a
discussion about the advantages and disadvantages
of the mobile phone.
China has the most mobile phones in the world. We can contact
people at any time and in any place. We can also send short
messages, listen to music and take photos with the mobile
phones. They are bad for our health. People seldom talk with
each other face to face. it is bad for them when they use them in
class.
It is reported that
The cell phones play an important part in our daily life.
By using it,
But
As a result of using it,
have fewer chances to
Especially for the students,
主题句： 巧用连词： 多变句式：
It is reported that China owns the most mobile phones in the
world. It plays an important part in our daily life. By using it, we can
contact people at any time and in any place. Also，we can send short
messages, listen to music and take photos with the mobile phones. But
they are bad for our health. As a result of using it, people have fewer
chances to communicate with each other face to face. Especially for
the students, when they use them in class, it is really bad for them.
After taking part in the activity, we had a better understanding of
the cell phones. We also realize that nothing is more important than to
work hard now.
Last Monday we held an activity about whether the students should
use the mobile phones. Ms Tang was invited to give us a talk. After her
speech, we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of
the mobile phone.
主题句： 巧用连词： 多变句式：
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1、study
2、list
3、modify
4、copy
Who-do-what
3ways
主题句
连词
不同的句式
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Let’s discuss how to write a beautiful composition
Firstly/First of all/ To begin with,
Secondly,
Thirdly,
Lastly/Finally/Last but not least
The steps are designed as follows.
In a word, …..Only in this way can we
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