When life throws us a dirty curveball, it typically doesn't make any sense to us, and
our natural emotional reaction might be to get extremely upset and scream at the top of
our lungs. But how does this help our trouble? Obviously, it doesn't.
This evening I met a friend at a local bar. She brought her brand-new laptop along so
she could show me some of her latest digital art designs. As we chatted and scanned
through her artwork, the laptop suddenly started making an unhealthy buzzing noise,
then the screen flashed on and off and then cut off completely. And as we both stared
at one another in confusion,the smell of fried computer circuits consumed our noses.
The barkeeper and even some customers came up afterwards and asked what was
wrong with the computer.
I grabbed the laptop to inspect it and the problem instantly revealed itself.The
bottom of the laptop was wet and an empty,spilt water glass rested against the side of
her purse just behind where the laptop was sitting.
In the midst of us chatting and shifting the laptop's 17 inch screen back and forth,we
somehow spilt a glass of water that the barkeeper had placed behind the screen by
mistake, which was out of our view. This situation, running normal logic, the next thing
would soon get into aheated argument over damage.
When I glanced at my friend with a little bit of worry,——————————————
The smartest, and oftentimes hardest, thing we can do in these kinds of situations is to
be more sensible in our reactions.——————————————————————
2.举例法
(Exemplification)1. 列举法(Listing)
3. 时空顺序法
(Time and Space
Sequence)
4.因果分析法
(Cause and Effect)
6. 分类法
(Classification)
5. 比较对照法
(Comparison & Contrast)
7. 下定义
Definition
评分标准
1 与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度
2 内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的
应用情况
3 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性
4 上下文的连贯性
学生存在问题
1.审题失误
2.第二段不知道如
何进行段落拓展
（感想观点）
Writing style
审体裁：记叙文（道理+故事）
审时态：一般过去时
审前文大意以及要点
I ， a friend, bar keeper
in the evening
at a local bar
My friend's computer was cut off .
The circuits stopped because of the water the bar keeper
Emotional reaction does't help one get out of trouble.
a story (when, where, who, what, how)
who:
when:
where :
what:
why:
theme:
Step1.read for information
Step2.read for plots/events
Characters
Step3.read for language
1.How did the writer describe the laptop when it
went wrong?
1）started making an unhealthy buzzing noise,
2）then the screen flashed on and off and then cut
off completely.
3）The smell of fried computer circuits
consumed our noses.
This situation, running normal logic, the next thing
would soon get into aheated argument over damage.（last sentence）
Para 1：When I glanced at my friend with a little bit
of worry,
1.what would my friend do next?
2.How would the writer feel?
3.What woud he do to the bar keeper?
4.How to connect to para2?
Para 2：The smartest, and often times hardest, thing
we can do in these kinds of situations is to be more
sensible in our reactions
What is the focus of this para?
How to echo the theme of the passage?
Would my friend lost her
temper or not?
1
1
1
1
Paragraph l:
When I glanced at my friend with a litle bit of worry, not sure what I was supposed to
say to ease her mood. She raised her bent body, took a piece of tissue paper from the
box, and while gazing sadly at the computer, still said very calmly- -It was my fault. But
just at that moment, the most unexpected thing happened. The barkeeper stepped out
and said, “Please leave it with me and I'll fix it for you.”
Paragraph 2:
The smartest, and oftentimes hardest, thing we can do in these kinds of situations is to
be more sensible in our reactions. To remember that losing temper only makes matters
worse. Troubles are rarely as bad as they seem, and even when they are, they give us
an opportunity to grow stronger. And once they pass, all we re left with are our unique
experiences with each other and the lessons we' ve learned along the way. Life is
unpredictable, but the choice is ours to make.
卷面；
段落，字数；
衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）
故事发展
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
改卷经验
出现的问题
衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）
故事发展
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
出现的问题
衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）
故事发展
童话式的
寓言式的
无厘头式的
戏剧式的
出现的问题
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
1 afraid; nervous; frightened
2 catch, catch up, catch up with
3 “Get into the car quickly, man!” said Paul.
4 发动汽车
5 狼追我们
6汽油不够
7 自行车上跳下
8 call ?/ call for? the police
出现的问题
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
He saw the wolf’s face near him. He used his fist
hit the face of the wolf strongly.
Seeing the wolf’s face so close to him, he hit it
with all his strength/ heavily using his fist.
出现的问题
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
基本语法错误
不规则动词（P106）
though/but
dangerous/ in danger
thanks to/ thanks
出现的问题
准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；
符合情景否？）
1 “Hey, friend! Calm down! Jump out of your
bicycle and get into our car!” shouted Paul.
2 A few minutes later, the police arrived.
3 妻子带着孩子过来了。
4 送医院去了。
5 骑自行车一会儿就到家了。
描写恐惧
¬Though he was safe, he still felt the dread stopping
the passage of air to his lung, with his legs trembling.
¬At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that
my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
¬At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror,
too scared to move an inch.
¬At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a
strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
¬It was really a moment of life and death. Sitting in
the car, he still felt his heart beating wildly.
¬He sat there, too frightened to utter a word.
what:
heard, saw, fount out, fired, fired again,
pedal hard, waved and yelled
heard，pulled
a story:
beginning;
development;
ending
结伴骑行---独自遇狼---
奋力逃生
逃出，感受
阅读理解问题反馈
知识问题
1.一词多义
2.长难句句子结构断句（BCD篇）
3.话题不熟练知识不全面(阅读量少的学生，报纸）
能力问题
1.审题不清（27题）
A.漏掉关键词，
B.题干多义理解错误
C.想当然错误理解题干
2.不能明确写作目的
A. 细节推理断章取义30题 （不能联系上
下文理解该句存在的意义
B. 文章写作目的不理解，不能理解段间关
系（24.34）
C. 不能从文章用词行文方式推出作者情感
D
The term "telecommuting” refers to a workforce arrangement in which there is no
central office where employees gather and work. Instead, these employees work
wherever they can access the people and materials needed to complete their projects
and daily tasks. One of the most common locations for telecommuters to work is their
own homes.However,with today's advanced tecileological equipment, employees can
work anywhere. Laptop computers and tablets allow for facile m obility, as do wireless
Internet "hot spots” and even smartphones with high speed internect connectivity.
More employers should consider the advantages of a telecommuting arrangement.It
allows employers to hire people who otherwise would not be available. This includes
parents with small children, the physically disabled, and people living far from urban
centers. Plus, it allows for a more globalized business, since the company can employ
people in all parts of the world regardess of location or time zone. According to a recent
poll, approximately one in five workers telecommutes frequently, and nearly 10 percent
never set foot in a traditional office.
Still, some barriers do exist to more employers' adopting a telecommuting work model.
Liability insurance and worker's compensation in case of accidents can become serious
issues, and all other applicable laws and regulations must be fully investigated. In
addition, the long-established way to manage employees has been to observe workers
firsthand. Therefore, many companies do not allow full-time telcommuting for fear of a
drop in productivity levels.
However, most studies find that frequent face-to-face interactions through video-
conferencing,as wel as allowing for periods of adjustment to the new work system, are
often al that is neded to overcome any obstacles. The advantages of telecommuting —
even two or three days a week —faroutweigh any possible disadvantages, and most of
the employer concerns about telecom muting are unfounded. They are simply based on
ignorance of new hi-tech breakthroughs or on fear of change to the traditional workforce
environment.Clearly, employers today should not overlook the option of telecommuting
1
If you are thinking about asking for a raise in salary,there are several things to keep in
mind. First, consider whether you deserve a higher salary. 36 Sit down and make a list of your
job accomplishments.Be as specific as possible.For example,think about important projects you
have worked on, things you have done to improve the organization of work in your department,
or how your efforts have brought more money to the company. Also include any professional
development opportunities you have taken advantage of recently and be ready to explain how
they have improved your performance on the job. 37
Bear in mind that salary levels are based not only on performance but also on the market
for your particular skills. Before you ask for a raise, you need to do some research. You should
investigate the industry standards for salaries for people in similar positions with similar levels of
experience. 38 Your initial request should actually be slightly higher than the amount you want
in order to leave some room for negotiation. Then, if you have to go lower than this amount, you
still end up with something close to what you want.
39 If you have recently been given new responsibilities, it makes sense to ask for a higher
level of compensation.On the other hand, if the company is going through financial difficulties,a
request for more money will probably not be met with a favorable response. It would be better to
wait until the company is in a better financial position.
. Finally, never give personal reasons for wanting a higher salary.Your need to pay your child's
college tuition or buy a bigger house is of no concern to your boss.40 That is where you need to
keep the conversation.
A. This will help you determine what would be a reasonable amount of money to ask for.
B. Skills play a key role in your salary level.
C. A crucial point is the timing of your request.
D. Everyone is eager for a raise in salary.
E. You probably do,but you should be able to explain exactly why to your boss.
F. Your salary level should be based on professional considerations alone.
G.Then you will be better prepared when you meet with your boss.
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announce: 多指首次宣布大家感兴趣或可满足大家好奇心的事情。
declare: 侧重正式就某事清楚明白地宣布。
proclaim: 指官方宣布重大事件或施政方针，语体比announce正式。
pronounce: 词义与announce,declare接近，但较多用于指法律判决方面的宣布。
advertise: 指通过文字和图像资料等的反复宣传而引起公众的注意，有时隐含令
人不快或言过其实的意味。
broadcast: 专指利用广播或电视传播消息或发表见解。
publish: 专指通过报刊或其它媒介向公众公布事情。
●戴夫是当地社区大学的化妆师。
●他的学生大多是中年家庭主妇。
●但是一位绅士成了他的新学生，而且学习非常努力。
●其他女人都对这位绅士很好奇。
●最后，其中一个女士问他对化妆艺术如此感兴趣的
理由。
●他说出了最动人的回答。
● ...who wanted to... so as to make themselves more
attractive.
●But this time, it was beyond him that...
●He was keen to learn as much as he possibly...
●He was so... that he wouldn’t stop until...
●Understandably, ...
● Throughout the lessons, ignoring the curious women
around him, ...
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