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短文改错专练（四）
李仕才
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A
My mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push her car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.
B
One morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as
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it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.
C
I was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.
D
There was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everything went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.
E
Time and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that
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something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.
F
I love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.
G
Last Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.
H
I have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be
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two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s books regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.
答案：
A
1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly
2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a
3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked
4. ... needed any helps. helps → help
5. ... right next by ... by → to
6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was
7. ... offered his help ... his → their
8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as
9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in
10. We both smiled ... both → all
B
1. One morning when ... 去掉when
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2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to
3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid
4. ... looking for the ... the → a
5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible
6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written
7. ... enough changes ... changes → change
8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed
9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging
10. ... giving it to myself. myself → me
C
1. ... the member of staff ... the → a
2. ... where had just ... where → which / that
3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker
4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually
5. ... of my turn. 去掉of
6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me
7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before
8. ... like a cashier ... like → as
9. ... paid for his ... his → her
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10. ... but volunteered to ... but → and
D
1. ... the piano class. the → a
2. ... required play ... play前加to
3. ... according to that ... that → which
4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation
5. I say at ... say → said
6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but
7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily
8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However
9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping
10. His words are ... His → Her
E
1. ... wait no man. wait后加for
2. This is everything ... everything → something
3. I have spent ... have → had
4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling
5. ... time to changing. changing → change
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6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely
7. ... a hour ahead. a → an
8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been
9. Look back on ... Look → Looking
10. ... which I've done ... which → what
F
1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty
2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy
3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about
4. ... English is exception. is后加no
5. ... new words are ... are → is
6. ... use it as ... it → them
7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen
8. ... I had decided ... had → have
9. ... with English ... with → in
10. ... end of a year. a → the
G
1. ... it have been ... have → had
2. ... the last time I ... the前加since
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3. ... store sells ... sells → selling
4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised
5. ... so much singing ... much → many
6. ... noticed there had ... had → were
7. ... what amazing ... what → how
8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly
9. ... open for it. it → them
10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉at
H
1. ... which name ... which → whose
2. ... two year old. year → years
3. Her name is ... is → was
4. ... is his angel. his → her
5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading
6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep
7. ... to the bed! 去掉the
8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient
9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of
10. ... so a lovely ... so → such
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