中考英语写作专题指导我们的变化优质

第二部分 高频话题写作指导 九年级（全） Units 3-4 我们的变化 写作导图 从广西近五年“我们的变化”相关话题的 书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为：① 介绍人物各方面的变化，包括：外貌、性格、 心理、学习、人际交往等方面，如：2013年崇 左针对课堂教学改革说明现在和过去的课堂变 化；2012年南宁以“How I Change”为题描述 自己三年初中前后的变化。 ②介绍周围的变化，包括：学校、家乡、 城市、所居住环境的变化，如：2010年 来宾根据所给图片介绍自己及家乡的情 况（环保、精神面貌、新变化等）。以 （2012年南宁）为例： used to be Appearance: fat、short… Personality: shy、quiet、lonely… Hobbies: play computer games… now become Appearance: taller、stronger… Personality: outgoing、friendly… Hobbies: sports、read… in the past now How I Change 亮点句型速成 常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now. 推荐句型： ①Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much better now than before. ②With the help of (Under the help of) my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now. ③I have made a great progress on my English with the help of (under the help of) my teachers and classmates. 常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot. 推荐句型： ①I was interested in playing computer games before, so I played it a lot. ② I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty time on it. 开头句：1. Great changes have taken place In the past three years around me. 中间句：1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing. 2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates. 3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years. 4. I was fat and short before I came to the middle school. 5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. 6. So I become taller and stronger than before. 结尾句： 1. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier. 2. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are both pleased with me. 典例剖析（2012南宁） 初中的学习生活即将结束了。 请你 以“How I Change”为题，写一篇短文， 描述你这三年里前后的变化。写作要点 包括外貌、兴趣爱好、行为习惯等方面。 写作要求：1. 词数在80个左右（开头已给出，不 计入总词数）； 2. 短文中不能出现校名和人名，否则不得分； 3. 所给的写作要点都必须用上；紧扣主题，适当 发挥。 How I Change My life has changed a lot in the past three years. ______________________ 【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取 以下信息： 1. 短文必须包括三年里前后的变化，包括外貌、 兴趣爱好、行为习惯等方面； 2. 写过去的情况用一般过去时，现在的情况用 一般现在时； 3. 词数80词左右，不得出现真实姓名、校名， 所给的写作要点必须都用上。 【范文点评】 How I Change My life has changed a lot in the past three years. ① I ④used to be fat and short when I came to the middle school. ①when引导的 状语从句提升 了文章的文采， 复合句的使用 将会是文章的 提分点所在； ②At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of my time on it. My parents were worried about me. ②was interested in, spend... on; were worried about等固 定短语的使用使文 章过渡自然，读起 来朗朗上口。 ④Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. ④文章结构清 楚，第一句总 结全文，之后 用used to be说 明了过去的一 些情况，然后 用now写出现 在的变化。 ③Good habits help me to study better and be- come healthier. ③help sb. to do sth.这 种固定用法和形容词 比较级的使用使文章 的内容达到一种飞跃。