人教版高中英语必修二第五单元B2U5写作指导：MUSIC

B2U5 写作：MUSIC 写作题目 假如你叫李华,是一名中学生,非常喜欢看某档音乐类节目,你决定和朋友们组建一支乐 队,请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括: 1.你非常喜欢这档节目,它能给你带来很多欢乐; 2.正准备和朋友们组建一支乐队; 3.介绍乐队成员、歌曲风格、乐队的排练和演出计划等。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear friends, I’m very honored to give you a speech on music._____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________Thank you! 思路点拨 主题爱好 体裁 应用文 人称以第一人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主 布局 第一部分:表达对音乐的喜爱第二部分:介绍组建的乐队第三部分:期待朋 友们的建议 遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.爱上 2. n.目的;目标 3. n.乐队;带子 4. n.天才;天赋;天资 5. adv.(用以强调)全部;总共 6.除……以外(还) 7. n.表演;演技;表现 答案 1.fall in love with2.aim3.band4.talent5.altogether6.in addition7.performance Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 (1)我已经爱上了音乐,所以我打算和我的朋友组建一个乐队。 I have music, so I intend to . (2)我们的乐队由四个学生组成,一个是歌手,其余的弹吉他、弹电子琴和打鼓。 Four students our band, and the rest playing the guitar, the keyboard and the drums. (3)此外,我们还喜欢摇滚音乐,并且我想自己做一些(摇滚音乐)。 , we rock music, and I’d like to make some on my own. (4)我们想知道如何保持学习和乐队之间的平衡,以及我们能做些什么来让它成为一个 成功的乐队。 We are wondering how we keep a balance between study and the band and 。 答案 (1)fallen in love with;form a band with my friends (2)make up;one being the singer (3)In addition;are also fond of (4)what we can do to make it a successful band 2.句式升级 (5)用不定式作表语改写句(1) ___________________________________________________________________________________ _____ (6)用被动语态改写句(2) ___________________________________________________________________________________ _____ (7)用非限制性定语从句及 what 引导的主语从句改写句(3) ___________________________________________________________________________________ _____ 答案 (5)I have fallen in love with music, so my aim is to form a band with my friends. (6)Our band is made up of four students altogether, one being the singer and the rest playing the guitar, the keyboard and the drums. (7)In addition, what we are also fond of is rock music, some of which I’d like to make on my own. 连句成篇 Dear friends, I’m very honored to give you a speech on music. _____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________Thank you! 参考范文 基础篇 Dear friends, I’m very honored to give you a speech on music. I’m Li Hua, I really enjoy watching a music program, and I have fallen in love with music, so I intend to form a band with my friends. Four students make up our band, one being the singer and the rest playing the guitar, the keyboard and the drums. As far as I am concerned, I have been playing the drums for almost ten years. Our music is based on Jay Chou, whose talent is admirable. In addition, we are also fond of rock music, and I’d like to make some on my own. Our band is scheduled to practice our music in my room, which is the first step to success. Then we plan to give some performances in our school. We are wondering how we keep a balance between study and the band and what we can do to make it a successful band. We’d appreciate it if you could give us some suggestions. Thank you! 提升篇 Dear friends, I’m very honored to give you a speech on music. I’m Li Hua, I really enjoy watching a music program, and I have fallen in love with music, so my aim is to form a band with my friends. Our band is made up of four students altogether, one being the singer and the rest playing the guitar, the keyboard and the drums. As far as I am concerned, I have been playing the drums for almost ten years. Our music is based on Jay Chou, whose talent is admirable. In addition, what we are also fond of is rock music, some of which I’d like to make on my own. Our band is scheduled to practice our music in my room, which is the first step to success. Then we plan to give some performances in our school. We are wondering how we keep a balance between study and the band and what we can do to make it a successful band. We’d appreciate it if you could give us some suggestions. Thank you! 写作积累 英语演讲稿开头要开门见山,既要一下子吸引听众又要提出你的观点,中间要用各种方 法和所准备的材料说明、支撑你的观点,感染听众,然后在结尾加强说明论点或得出结论,结 束演讲。 在格式上,演讲稿一般由称呼语、正文、结束语三部分构成: 1.称呼语:称呼语要顶格书写。常用的称呼语有 Dear boys and girls, Dear friends, Ladies and gentlemen 等,也可以不用称呼语,直接写正文。 2.正文:首先应该开门见山提出问题并表达对问题的看法,然后说明理由,最后照应开头 对全文做简明扼要的总结,总结一定要简练有力、切中要点。在汇报经验、情况等的发言中, 要注意针对情况的叙述,介绍自己的体会或收获等,内容要完整,不遗漏要点。 3.结束语:发言结束时,一般常用“Thank you for listening!”“That’s all. Thank you!” “Thanks a lot!”等表示感谢,还可以在结束时直接向听众表达希望、发出号召。