外研版八年级下册英语课件Module9写作素养提升练

外研版八年级下 写作素养提升练 外研版八年级下 本模块以“友谊”为话题，说明了友谊的重 要性。它与学生的日常生活息息相关。该话题常 见的命题形式是让学生描述一位自己的好友，叙 述一段友谊。 素材典藏 separate, explain, mention, refuse, treat, lonely, regret, patient, encourage, silence, bright, friendly, treasure, trust, include, circle 单 词： 素材典藏 explain sth. to sb., feel lonely, in silence, encourage sb. to do, day by day 短 语： 素材典藏 1. I was lonely and afraid to make friends with anyone. 2. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly. 3. It made me feel happy, lively and warm. 4. It was like a hidden treasure and changed my life. 5. Day by day, I learned to trust people, and they included me in their circle of friends. 6. We stick together like glue. 句 型： 经典例题 假设你是李玲，你的好友王小薇刚转到了一所新学校， 面对陌生的环境，她感到很不适应。 她给你写了一封信， 向你诉说了她的困难。请你用英语给她回一封信，帮助她 解决这些困难。词数：70 左右。 经典例题 Dear Li Ling, I have a problem in the new school. I often feel lonely and worried. I have no close friends and I don't know how to get along well with my classmates. What should I do? Yours, Wang Xiaowei 经典例题 Dear Wang Xiaowei, ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ 经典例题 【审题指导】 1. 体裁：应用文 2. 话题：帮助朋友解决友谊方面的问题 3. 人称：第二人称 4. 时态：一般现在时，注意提建议的句型 经典例题 【思路构建】 经典例题 Dear Wang Xiaowei, Glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you said you felt lonely and worried. Don’t worry about it. Here is some advice. First, a smile is a treasure for everyone because it brings a touch of happiness. Whether you are at school or not, try to make friends with your classmates. Second, you should try to help them when they are in trouble. The old saying goes, “A 【范文赏析】 经典例题 friend in need is a friend indeed.” Helping others is a good way to shape and develop friendships. Third, please remember to give everyone a smile every day. In fact, everyone likes a smiling face. If so, you will be happy and have more friends. I hope you can enjoy yourself. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ling 经典例题 点评：作者直接提出三点建议并且切实可行，同时用 first，second， third 连接三点建议，使文章简明扼要且有 层次；另外，作者运用了好词好句，如treasure， a touch of， shape and develop， A friend in need is a friend indeed.（患 难见真情。）文字优美，不拖沓,是一篇好作文。 写作实践 假设你们学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提 示，以 “Getting along well with others”为题，写一篇参赛 短文。 写作实践 写作实践 要求：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in touch with others. It is important for us to learn how to_________________________ ___________________________________________________ 写作实践 ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in touch with others. It is important for us to learn how to get on well with others. First, we should make friends with our classmates so that we can share joy and sadness together. They can also make our life colourful. Second, it is a good idea to do some volunteer work for our neighbours. In this way, we can do something 写作实践 ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ meaningful for them. Third, we need to communicate more with our parents to share our ideas with them. Also, we can do some housework for the family. At last, we can help teachers to do some work to make our class better and better.