命题探索
分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“人际沟通”这
一话题,河北并未考查。
分析全国近年真题可知,“人际沟通”属于高频话题,关于此话
题通常有以下命题角度:①谈论与他人沟通时遇到的问题并给出建议;
②如何与他人和谐相处。
教材链接
人教教材中涉及“人际沟通”的单元具体如下(可参考对应教材单
元记背优秀文段):
写作角度 年级、单元(Unit) 话题(Topic)
谈论与他人沟通
时遇到的问题并
给出建议、如何
与他人和谐相处
八(下)Unit 3 Could you please
clean your room? Chores and permission
八(下)Unit 4 Why don't you talk to
your parents?
Interpersonal
communication
重读教材词句段
词汇短语导图
【好句积累运用】
1. Although he's your best friend, you should still tell him that coping
others' homework is wrong.(句子仿写)[人教八(下)Unit 4 P28]
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________
教材好句佳段
角度 1 谈论与他人沟通时遇到的问题并给出建议
Although your parents have little time to talk with you, you should
tell them your feelings and your plans.
2. My best friend and I had a fight. She won't speak to me.(用and连接)
[人教八(下)Unit 4 P26]
______________________________________________________________
3. I'm shy so it's not easy for me to make friends.(用so...that..升格)[人教
八(上)Unit 3 P21 ]
______________________________________________________________
My best friend and I had a fight, and she won't speak to me.
I'm so shy that it's not easy for me to make friends.
【经典语段再现】[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
My problem is I can't ①_____________________________________
(与……友好相处) my family. Relations between my parents have
become difficult. They fight a lot, and I really don't like it. It's the only
communication they have. I don't know if I should ②________________
___________(对他们说些什么) about this.
get on with/get along with/be good with
say anything
to them
③________________[加入衔接词], my elder brother is not very nice to
me. He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show. Instead he
watches whatever he wants ④________________[加入衔接词] late at
night. I don't think this is fair. At home ⑤______________________
________________________[续写在家的感受]. What can I do?
Also
until
I always feel lonely and
nervous/I feel unhappy/...
【好句积累运用】
4. Why don't you sit down and communicate with your brother?(句子
仿写)[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
_____________________________________________________________
____________
角度 2 如何与他人和谐相处
Why don't you tell him to do something quietly when you're
studying?
5. You should just be yourself.(扩写原因)[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________
6. We should respect others.(扩写原因)
_____________________________________________________________
_____________
You should just be yourself because/for the reason that good
friends don't have to be all alike.
Everybody has his or her own ways to do things, so we should
respect others.
【经典语段再现】[人教八(下)Unit 4 P27]
⑥_______________________(为什么不) talk about these feelings
with your family? ⑦__________[加入衔接词] your parents are having
problems, you should offer to help. Maybe you could do more jobs
around the house ⑧____________[加入衔接词] they have more time
for proper communication.
Why don't you/Why not
If
so that
Secondly, why don't you sit down and communicate with your brother?
You should explain that you don't mind him ⑨_____________________
(一直看电视). ⑩____________[加入衔接词], he should let you watch
your favorite show.
watching TV all the time
However
典例剖析
批 注 审 题 (5定审题)
注意:(1)短文须包括提示中的三个要点和一个补充要点;
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名;
(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
How to Communicate with Our Parents
As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to communicate with
our parents openly and effectively. ______________________________
____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
列 提 纲 写 句 子
列提纲 写句子
开头:点明主题
①在与他们沟通时我们应该做些什么?(communicate with)
____________________________________________________
②这儿有一些建议。(some suggestions)
_______________________________________
正文:具体介绍和
父母沟通的技巧和
做法
建议一:③我们可以列举出与父母观点不一致的事情。
(make a list)
______________________________________
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则,表达正确)
列提纲 写句子
正文:具体介绍
和父母沟通的技
巧和做法
④我们可以找到彼此不同意对方的原因。(find out; disagree)
________________________________________________________
建议二:⑤与父母发生分歧时,我们不应该太生气。(get too
angry)
________________________________________________________
建议三:⑥我们应该与他们多交流。(talk with)
________________________________________________________
⑦我们应该学会如何真正地倾听。(how to really listen)
________________________________________________________
列提纲 写句子
正文:具体介绍
和父母沟通的技
巧和做法
建议四:⑧要确保有礼貌。(polite)
_______________________________________
结尾:总结全文
⑨我们是一家人。每个人都被爱和关心着。(care for)
________________________________________
普通范文 我来提升
How to Communicate with Our Parents
As we grow older, we'll find it's not easy to
communicate with our parents openly and
effectively. So ①what should we do when
communicating with them?②Here are some of my
suggestions.
一、让词汇更高级
1. firstly→__________
2. besides→____________
成 篇 章 (注意衔接连贯)
first of all
what's more
普通范文 我来提升
Firstly, ③make a list of things
our parents and we disagree about
most. ④We can find out the reason
why we disagree with each other.
S e c o n d l y, ⑤ w h e n w e h a v e
disagreements with them, we
shouldn't get too angry.
二、让句式丰富多彩
3. 用so that将③、④合并成一句
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
4. 扩写⑤具体做法
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
___________________
Make a list of things our parents and we
disagree about most so that we can find out the
reason why we disagree with each other.
When we have disagreements with them, we
shouldn't get too angry. Instead we should
learn to accept each other's ideas
little by little.
普通范文 我来提升
Thirdly,⑥we should talk with
them more! Sharing ideas can
make us closer. Besides, ⑦we
should also learn how to really
listen. Finally, ⑧be sure to be polite.
⑨We are a family. Everyone is
loved and cared for.
5. 用定语从句升格⑨
________________________________________
________________________________
【温馨提示】提升完成后,请务必在自己的练
习本上完整誊写一遍最终的升级范文。
We are a family in which everyone is loved
and cared for.
(2020山西改编)教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中,时
常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不理解,有的甚至
会有过激的反应。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示和要求用英语写
一篇短文,结合自己的经历谈谈如何正确对待父母和老师的批评。
提示: (1)What's your opinion about this phenomenon(现象)?
(2)Why do you think so?
(3)What's your advice?
学以致用
要求: (1)短文须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:criticize (批评) blame (责备)
写 作 三 步 曲
【批注审题】5定审题
【列提纲、写句子】注意人称、时态及其他语法规则
【成篇章】注意衔接连贯
For me, it is _____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
__________________________
and teachers blame us, which is beneficial to our lifelong development.
I still remember the day when I had an English class. Seeing Li
Ming falling asleep, our teacher, Miss Wu, woke him up and reminded
him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the
classroom without permission. Later, I talked with him and he realized
that he wasn't so calm at that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage
and said sorry to Miss Wu.
It's a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a moment
whenever being blamed.
of great importance to stay calm when our parents