命题探索
分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“人物介绍”这
一话题,仅在2017年考查了从“自身的优点、如何提升自我和将来的
梦想”三方面介绍自己。
分析全国近年真题可知,全国关于此话题的命题角度还有:从
“个人基本信息、外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好”等方面介绍自己
或他人,介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情。
教材链接
人教教材中涉及“人物介绍”话题的单元具体如下(可参考对应教
材单元记背优秀文段):
写作角度 年级、单元(Unit) 话题(Topic)
外貌特征 七(下)Unit 9 What does he look like? Physical appearance
性格特点
八(上)Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my
sister.
Personal traits
九(全)Unit 4 I used to be afraid of dark. How we have changed
写作角度 年级、单元(Unit) 话题(Topic)
兴趣爱好
七(下)Unit 1 Can you play the guitar? Joining a club
八(上)Unit 4 What's the best movie theater?Your town
八(上)Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game
show? Entertainment
九(全)Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to. Music and movies
优秀品质
九(全)Unit 14 I remember meeting all of
you in Grade 7.
School days
重读教材词句段
词汇短语导图
【好句积累运用】
1. My sister has the ability to play the violin well.(句子仿写)[人教九(全)
Unit 1 P6]
________________________________________________________——
______________
教材好句佳段
角度 1 介绍自身优点或特殊之处
He has the ability to organize the activity and everything is always
in good order.
2. She has won many world competitions. (扩写具体表现)[外研九(上)
Module 3 P18]
______________________________________________________________
_______________
She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals
in the Olympics.
【经典语段再现】[外研七(下)Module 2 P13]
I like playing the piano and I can play it well. I am Chinese
①_________[加入衔接词] I can speak Chinese very well and I can speak
English, too. I am very tidy and I help my mom to ②______________(打
扫我们家). I want to be the cleaning monitor at school ③___________
[加入衔接词]I want to make our classroom beautiful.
so
clean our home
because
【好句积累运用】
3. He has brown hair. He wears glasses.(用and升格)[人教七(下)Unit 9
P50]
_____________________________________________________________
4. He was very small.(用比较级升格)[译林牛津九(上)Unit 4 P50]
_____________________________________________________________
角度 2 介绍外貌特征
He has brown hair and wears glasses.
He was much smaller than the other kids at school.
【经典语段再现】[人教七(下)Unit 9 P54]
My best friend is Jack. Let me tell you ④___________________
(他长什么样). First of all, he is very tall and thin. He has straight brown
hair ⑤____________[加入衔接词] he doesn't wear glasses. He usually
wears jeans, a Tshirt and sports shoes. I like him ⑥________________
____________________[续写原因], and he is good at soccer.
what he looks like
and
because he is
really cool and fun
【好句积累运用】
5. I'm shy.(扩写结果)[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
_____________________________________________________________
6. Suzy is nice and friendly. (扩写具体事例)[译林牛津七(下)Unit 7 P88]
_____________________________________________________________
角度 3 介绍性格特点
I'm shy so it's not easy for me to make friends.
Suzy is nice and friendly. She says hello to everyone she meets.
7. Now Li Wen has really changed.(扩写具体表现)[人教九(全)Unit 4
P30]
_____________________________________________________________
_________________________________
8. Max has a good sense of humour.(扩写具体表现)[译林牛津八(上)
Unit 1 P8]
_____________________________________________________________
________________
Now Li Wen has really changed. He has become more outgoing and
made some good friends at school.
Max has a good sense of humour. He always tells funny jokes and
makes me laugh.
【经典语段再现】[人教八(上)Unit 3 P21]
I don't really care if my friends are the same as me or different. My
favorite saying is, “A true friend reaches for your hand and touches
your heart.” My best friend Carol is really kind and very funny. In fact,
she's ⑦____________(更有趣) than anyone I know.funnier
I broke my arm last year ⑧________________[加入衔接词] she made me
laugh and feel better. We can ⑨____________(谈论) and share everything.
I know she cares about me _______________________________[续写原因].
but
talk about
because she's always there to listen
【好句积累运用】
9. My favorite subject is science.(扩写原因)[人教七(上)Unit 9 P51]
_____________________________________________________________
角度 4 介绍兴趣爱好
My favorite subject is science, because it's interesting.
10. I'm serious about running. Running is the only thing I've ever
wanted to do.(用定语从句升格)[人教九(全)Unit 7 P54]
_____________________________________________________________
___________
11. I am interested in collecting stamps. It's a fantastic and special way
to see the world.(用as引导的原因状语从句升格)
_____________________________________________________________
____________________
I'm serious about running that/which is the only thing I've ever
wanted to do.
I am interested in collecting stamps as it's a fantastic and special
way to see the world.
【经典语段再现】[外研八(下)Module 6 P49]
Many people collect things, like ⑪__________________[续写事例].
They like to put them somewhere special to look at. Lingling collects
fans and keeps them ⑫____________(在架子上) in her bedroom. Betty
collects coins and notes. She also collects stamps from ⑬_____________
(世界各地).
postcards and toys
on a shelf
all over the world
Tony collects tickets, ⑭____________[加入衔接词] Betty thinks that
you cannot do anything with old tickets. Lingling thinks ⑮______[加
入衔接词] people also enjoy collecting things to remember something
important in their life.
but
that
【好句积累运用】
12. My first teacher was Mrs Lane. She was strict. She was also very
nice. (用adj.+but+adj.升格)[外研七(下)Module 7 P42]
_____________________________________________________________
角度 5 介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感激之情
My first teacher was Mrs Lane. She was strict but very nice.
13. I like my English teacher. He always took the time to explain things
to me clearly.(用because引导的原因状语从句升格)[人教九(全)Unit 14
P106]
_____________________________________________________________
___________________________
I like my English teacher because he always took the time to
explain things to me clearly.
【经典语段再现】[译林牛津七(下)Unit 7 P90]
Daniel is a clever boy. He learns things quickly. He can use
computers well. ⑯_______________[加入过渡句], he often helps at the
Helping Hands Club and does most of the computer work for the club.
When he is free
Daniel ⑰_________________[加入衔接词] plans everything well
after carefully thinking. He is ⑱_________________(……的一员) our
Project Hope group and often takes part in activities like
⑲__________________________________________[列举具体事例].
always/usually
a member of
collecting clothes and books for children in need
典例剖析
批 注 审 题 (5定审题)
要求:(1)演讲词须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about
myself. ______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
Thanks for your attention!
列 提 纲 写 句 子
列提纲 写句子
开头:引出主题
(已给出)
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about
myself.
正文:详细介绍自
己的优点、自我提
升的方法以及自己
的梦想
1. 优点:①我是一位友好且乐于助人的人。(kind;helpful)
____________________________________________________
②我唱歌和跳舞很棒。我经常在学校的晚会上表演。(sing;
dance)
____________________________________________________
(注意人称、时态及其他语法规则,表达正确)
列提纲 写句子
正文:详细介绍
自己的优点、自
我提升的方法以
及自己的梦想
2. 自我提升:③回想过去我所做的,我应该在空闲时间承担更多
的家务。(think back)
________________________________________________________
④做家务对我将来的生活有帮助。(helpful)
________________________________________________________
3. 梦想:⑤我想当一名老师。(want to)
________________________________________________________
列提纲 写句子
正文:详细介绍
自己的优点、自
我提升的方法以
及自己的梦想
⑥我想和我的学生交朋友。(make friends with )
________________________________________________________
⑦我想教给他们我知道的一切。(teach them )
________________________________________________________
结尾:表达感谢
(已给出)
Thanks for your attention!
普通范文 我来提升
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to
talk about myself. ①I'm a kind and helpful
person.②I can sing and dance well. I often give
performances at our school parties.
一、让词汇更高级
1. should→______________
2. want to→
________________________
成 篇 章 (注意衔接连贯)
be supposed to
be willing to/would like to
普通范文 我来提升
③Thinking back what I've
done before, I should help my
parents do more housework.
④Doing housework is good for my
future life.
二、让句式丰富多彩
3. 扩写①的具体表现
________________________________________
_______________________________________
4. 用“be good at”和“so...that”升格②
________________________________________
________________________________________
I'm a kind and helpful person. I'm always
ready to help others when they're in trouble.
I am so good at singing and dancing that I
often give performances at our school parties.
普通范文 我来提升
As for my dream, I ⑤want to
be a teacher. ⑥I'll make friends
with my students. ⑦I want to
teach them everything I know!
Thanks for your attention!
5. 用“when”引导的时间状语从句升格③
________________________________________
________________________________________
6. 用and升格⑥和⑦
________________________________________
________________________________
【温馨提示】提升完成后,请务必在自己的练
习本上完整誊写一遍最终的升级范文。
When I think back what I've done before, I
should help my parents do more housework.
I'll make friends with my students and would
like to teach them everything I know!
在你的学习生涯中,一定遇到过传道授业风格迥异的老
师们。请以“My most unforgettable teacher”为题,并根据以下提示和
要求,用英语写一篇短文。
提示: (1)Who is your most unforgettable teacher?
(2)What did he or she do?
(3)How did he or she influence you?
要求: (1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
学以致用
写 作 三 步 曲
【批注审题】5定审题
【列提纲、写句子】注意人称、时态及其他语法规则
【成篇章】注意衔接连贯
My most unforgettable teacher
A good teacher is like a guide, and he/she can show you the right
way. _________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
When I was in Grade Seven, I spent too much time playing
instead of studying. So I always did my homework quickly with terrible
handwriting. One day, Ms. Liu let me stay after school. She gently told
me that people could know a person by his or her handwriting. From
then on, I paid more attention to my handwriting as well as my study.
Ms. Liu not only changed my handwriting, but also changed my attitude
towards learning. I'll never forget her.
In my heart, Ms. Liu is a good teacher and I'll never forget her.