外研版八年级英语下册Module9Friendship---Writing

--- Writing 1.To be able to talk about friendship and write a composition. 能够谈论友谊话题并写一篇作文。 2. To be able to grasp (掌握) ways of writing and improve writing skills. 能够掌握写作方法并提高写作技巧。 Study aims Writing task 2015中考 朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认 为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还 是……？请结合你的经历写一篇短文谈谈看法。 内容提示： (1) What is the most important about friendship? (2) Share your experience. Brainstorm When we talk about friendship, what can you think of? be honest to each other key points 要点明确 help each other share …with each other always be there have a lot in common A special friend A special friend is someone to treasure. That someone to be with always a pleasure. There to help when life gets too many difficulties. A friend is by your side when difficulty is coming. Someone to listen, a shoulder to accompany (陪伴). A friend will be always there when other people have gone. Laugh with you, cry with you, no matter what happened. Mistakes and shortcomings (缺点) don’t concern (影响) her a little. So, to my special friend, I thank you each day. And know that forever by my side you will stay. Through good times and bad you’ll always be there. My tears are to get less and less, and my laughter is to share more. Enjoy a poem Structure 结构清晰 ---Unit 2 A beautiful smile lonely, afraid beginning body ending lively, happy, begin to talk, become friends smile What happened change key point A girl gave me… It was a smile. 开门见山，直奔主题。语言简练明确，点题。 at first 起因 feelings & opinions Now I believe…If you think… My suggestion is: smile … then经过 finally结果 概括全文中心思想，升华主题，扣题。 Beautifying美化语言 1. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly. 2. It made me feel happy, lively and warm. 3. That smile changed my life. 4. It was like a hidden treasure. 5. The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend, and we stick together like glue. Group work be honest to each other help each other share …with each other always be there have a lot in common 4 3 1 2 5 Beautifying美化语言 1. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly. 2. It made me feel happy, lively and warm. 3. That smile changed my life. 4. It was like a hidden treasure. 5. The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend, and we stick together like glue. 1. In my opinion, real friends should always be ready to help each other. 2. I’m lucky to have such a friend. 3. I realize the appearance doesn’t mean anything but a kind heart makes one beautiful. 4. No matter how sad I felt, he never laughed at me. Instead, he not only gave me advice but also encouraged me to face the problem bravely. 连接词 过渡语 Standard 标准 1.要点明确，内容与要点一致，反复扣题。 2.结构清晰，叙事生动具体，详略得当。 3.语言丰富，语法无误，真情实感，具有读 者意识。 Writing task My best friend beginning body ending key points What happened at first起因 then经过 finally结果 feelings opinions---key points 读者意识 （具有真 情实感） 2. 2015中考 朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认 为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还 是……？请结合你的经历写一篇短文谈谈看法。 内容提示：(1) What is the most important about friendship? (2) Share your experience. Move 迁移 2018市一模 成长意味着让自己变得更好，成长让我们学会感恩、 学会合作、学会自立……请同学们围绕话题“Myself now and then”,分享成长经历，写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容提示：（1）What was I like in the past? （2） How have I changed? When I was young, I was shy and nervous and always afraid of difficulties. But now I have changed a lot because of my best friend. With the help of my friend, I changed and learned that no matter what difficulties we meet, all we should do is to try our best without fear. And there comes the success. Sum up 总结 How to write • 确定写作文的要点和内容。 • 建构作文的框架结构。 • 让语言丰富优美，赋予真情实感， 有读者意识。 Homework 1. 完成当堂作文并加以修改润色。 2. 迁移作文—2018市一模。