应用文写作专题
浙江省嘉兴市
2018-2019
学年高一上学期期末英语试卷
第二节:应用文写作(满分 15 分)
22.(15 分)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部( photography club)将举办主题摄影展.请
给喜欢摄影的英国朋友 Tom 写封信,告知他展览的消息并邀请他提供作品.内容包括:
1.主题:保护文化遗产;
2.展览时间:6 月 1 日至 14 日;
3.投稿邮箱: photographyshow@163c0m.
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
【分析】高分句型一:I'm delighted to inform you of the news that the photography club of
our school is going to hold a photography show about cultural relics protection.
译文:我很高兴地通知你,我们学校摄影俱乐部将举办一场文物保护摄影展.
分析:这句话使用 that 引导同位语从句.
高 分 句 型 二 : If you'd like to join in , please send your photos to photographyshow
(@163.com.
译文:如果您想加入,请将照片发送至 photoshow(@163.com).
分析:这句话使用 if 引导条件状语从句.
【解答】Dear Tom
I'm delighted to inform you of the news that the photography club of our school is going to
hold a photography show about cultural relics protection.【高分句型一】(主题:保护文
化遗产)
It will start from June lst and last two weeks.(展览时间:6 月 1 日至 14 日)I know you're
keen on taking pictures and protecting cultural relics. This is surely an opportunity for you to
achieve your ambition.If you'd like to join in, please send your photos to photographyshow
(@163.com.【高分句型二】(投稿邮箱: photographyshow@163c0m)
Your participation is highly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,
一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给
出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符
合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使
文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作
联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
浙江省浙南名校联盟温州九校
2018-2019
学年高一英语上学期期末联考试题
第三节:应用文写作(满分 15 分)
81.假定你是李华,是学校机器人俱乐部(robot club)的主席,俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比
赛。请你给外教 Mr. Brown 写封邮件,邀请他担任比赛的评委。
内容包括:
1、活动目的;
2、时间、地点等。
注意:
1、词数 80 左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of our school robot club. I’m writing to invite you to be the judge for
the robot designing competition organized by us.
The competition, whose aim is to promote students’ creativity, will be held in the school hall.
It starts from 2 and lasts about 2 hours on the afternoon of January 25. Every competitor is to
present his works and give a brief introduction to it.
I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的
信息。第一,1、活动目的;2、时间、地点等。第二,人称为第三人称和第一人称。第三,
时态为一般现在时为主,兼用一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第
一段,邀请 Mr. Brown 担任机器人设计比赛的评委。第二段,活动目的;时间、地点等。
第三段,期待回复。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: invite,judge,aim ,present ,the robot designing competition,
promote students’ creativity, in the school hall,2 and lasts about 2 hours on the afternoon of
January 25, give a brief introduction to.
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:过去分词短语作后置定语 I’m writing to invite you to be the
judge for the robot designing competition organized by us. whose 引导的定语从句 The
competition, whose aim is to promote students’ creativity, will be held in the school hall. if 引导
的条件状语从句 I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation.
第五步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的
句式:如过去分词短语作后置定语 I’m writing to invite you to be the judge for the robot
designing competition organized by us. whose 引导的定语从句 The competition, whose aim is to
promote students’ creativity, will be held in the school hall. if 引导的条件状语从句 I would
appreciate it if you accept my invitation.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
浙江省金华市十校联考
2018-2019
学年高一英语上学期期末考试试题
六、书面表达
51.假定你是李华.你的英国笔友 Jenny 询问你进入高中后的学习和生活情况。请用英语给
他 回一封信,主要内容包括:
1.学校印象;
2.校园活动;
3.学习情况。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jenny,
Knowing that you are interested in my new school life, I felt delighted to share it with you.
It's my honor to be admitted to this school. The first time I entered the campus,
devoted teachers, friendly classmates and the beautiful scenery fascinated me a lot. Colorful
activities and recreations, such as sports meeting, speech contests are always held to cultivate
our personalities and strengthen our friendship. What's more, I can put my heart into study in
harmonious cooperation with my classmates, which makes the school life here unforgettable.
How about your school life?
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给英国笔友 Jenny 写一封信,介绍你的高中生活和学习
情况。 该信应该明确三方面的内容:1.学校印象; 2.校园活动; 3.学习情况。
【详解】这篇作文内容非常贴近学生的生活,难度不大。考生可以根据自己的实际情况,
介绍高中生活和学习情况。文章应以现在时态为主,间或夹杂着过去时态。考生可以先根
据要点提示列出大纲,然后对大纲进行遣词造句,细节等方面的扩展。
【点睛】所给范文要点齐全,条理清楚。长短句交叉使用,表达自然顺畅。适当运用了一
些较好的句式,例如:定语从句(which makes the school life here unforgettable);被动语态
(Colorful activities and recreations,such as sports meeting,speech contests are always held);
非谓语动词(to cultivate our personalities and strengthen our friendship),为文章增色不少。
浙江省丽水市
2018-2019
学年高一英语上学期期末教学质量监测试题
第三节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,你参加了外教 Tommy 一个学期的英语口语课,收获很大。在此学期结束
之际,请用英语给他写封 e-mail,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢;
2. 谈谈收获;
3. 送上祝福。
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加内容,使内容充实,行文连贯。
八、书面表达: (满分 15 分)
One possible version:
Dear Tommy,
How time flies! It has been a term since you taught me English.
Recalling the days we spent together, I am deeply impressed with your energy, humour and
devotion. I am grateful for your help in my spoken English. As a result, I made much progress
and gained great confidence in communicating with foreigners. Last week, I was lucky enough to
have served as a volunteer in an International Photography Festival held in my hometown.
By the way, it’s my sincere hope that you can enjoy yourself in the following days in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)内容要点
1. 表达感谢;
2. 谈谈收获;
3. 送上祝福。
(三)书面表达评分原则
1.上文仅为参考范文,学生可用不同的语言表达形式来表述要点。
2.本题总分为15分,按以下5个档次给分。评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其
所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
第一档:(1—3分)只能写出一两个要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子正确;
第二档:(4—6分)能写出部分要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达;
第三档:(7—9分)能写明基本要点;语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意;
第四档:(10—12分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文不够连贯,表
达基本清楚;
第五档:(13—15分)能写明全部要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。
3.词数少于60和多于100的,从总分中减去1分。
4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:时态、人称、内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和
准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
浙江省杭州市萧山区第八高级中学
2018-2019
学年高一英语上学期期末模拟试题
第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现在在招募志愿者,你希望
成为其中的一员。请按要求用英语给组委会写一封信。内容应包括:
1.个人情况:年龄、性别、学历
2.个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况
3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:
1.词数 80 左右,开头语已为你写好
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Sir\Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I wound like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Winter
Games.________________________________________________________________________
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五、应用文写作参考答案
Dear Sir\Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I wound like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. I was
quite excited when i heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city i live in. I am an
18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And i want to be a volunteer for the games. I
like making friends and i am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports
during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope i will be chosen to be one.