Module 9 Friendship---Writing
I. Study aims
1. To be able to talk about friendship and write a composition.
能够谈论友谊话题并写一篇作文。
2. To be able to grasp (掌握) ways of writing and improve writing skills.
能够掌握写作方法并提高写作技巧。
II. Presentation---How to write
2015 中考
朋友情深,友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中,你认为什么是最重要的?是以诚相待、彼
此信任,还是……?请结合你的经历写一篇短文谈谈看法。
内容提示:(1) What is the most important about friendship?
(2) Share your experience.
1. Key points 确定要点
a. Brainstorm to sum up key points as many as possible.
What is the most important about friendship, what can you think of?
b. Enjoy a poem and find out some key points about friendship and try to use the sentences.
2. Structure 结构清晰
A special friend
A special friend is someone to treasure.
That someone to be with always a pleasure.
There to help when life gets too many difficulties.
A friend is by your side when difficulty is coming.
Someone to listen, a shoulder to accompany (陪伴).
A friend will be always there when other people have gone.
Laugh with you, cry with you, no matter what happened.
Mistakes and shortcomings (缺点) don’t concern (影响) her a little.
So, to my special friend, I thank you each day.
And know that forever by my side you will stay.
Through good times and bad you’ll always be there.
My tears are to get less and less, and my laughter is to share more.
3. Beautifying 美化语言
1. In my opinion, real friends should always be ready to help each other.
2. I’m lucky to have such a friend.
3. I realize the appearance doesn’t mean anything but a kind heart makes one
beautiful.
4. No matter how sad I felt, he never laughed at me. Instead, he not only gave me
advice but also encouraged me to face the problem bravely.
III. Standard 评价标准
1. 要点明确,内容与要点一致,反复扣题。
2. 结构清晰,叙事生动具体,详略得当。
3. 语言丰富,语法无误,真情实感,具有读者意识。
IV. Practice---Writing task
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V. Move 迁移 2018 市一模
成长意味着让自己变得更好,成长让我们学会感恩、学会合作、学会自立……请同学们围
绕话题“Myself now and then”,分享成长经历,写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示:(1)What was I like in the past?
(2) How have I changed?