江苏省无锡市梁溪区-三年中考一模英语试卷精选汇编：书面表达专题

江苏省无锡市梁溪区 2019-2021 年三年中考一模英语试卷精选汇编 书面表达专题 无锡市梁溪区 2021 年中考一模英语试题 八、书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） 假设你是梁华，你的笔友 David 所在学校将组织“中国文化周 (Chinese Culture Week)” 活动。他写信请你帮忙策划并介绍中国元素 (Chinese elements)，以便让他的同学更好地了 解中国。你草拟了信件流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇回信。 注意事项： 1. 信件须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 提供的活动形式和中国元素为非限定性内容，仅供参考； 3. 词数在 90 个左右，信件的开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 4. 信件须写在答题卡的指定位置上。 八、书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） One possible version: Dear David, I’m very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It’s a good chance for you to learn more about China. First, a paper-cutting show is a good choice. As a traditional art, paper-cutting includes different themes like plants, animals, stories and so on. Then, holding a cooking competition can also attract people’s interest, which is helpful in learning traditional customs in different places. What’s more, talks about Chinese history, poems or even buildings are surely welcome. I hope my suggestions will be of some help to you. Yours, Liang Hua (90 words) （一）评分原则： 1. 本题总分为 15 分，按 5 个档次给分； 2. 评分时，先根据信件的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来 衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分； 3. 信件要求紧扣要点，内容可用不同方式表达，补充信息须符合情境； 4. 内容要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、语态误用，均为大错。其他错误（如 冠词、介词、拼写、标点等方面的错误）均为小错。3 处小错相当于 1 处大错。相 同的错误，只扣 1 次； 5. 词数少于 80 或多于 100 的，从总分中减去 1 分。 （二）各档次的给分要求： Possible elements Possible reasons Chinese art; delicious food; traditional clothes; … Why do you recommend them? Possible activities a show; a competition; … 档 次 得 分 错 误 情 况 第五档 15 分 无错；书写规范、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意 14~13 分 无大错，或只有小错 1～2 处 第四档 12～10 分 大错 1～2 处 第三档 9～7 分 大错 3～4 处 第二档 6～4 分 仅正确写出与内容要求相关的 1～2 个句子 第一档 3～1 分 只写出与内容相关的个别词语 0 分 白卷或通篇文不对题，不知所云 无锡市梁溪区 2020 年中考一模英语试题 八、书面表达 （本大题共 15 分） 假设你叫李华，是无锡市阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名初三学生，近日，看 到无锡市图书馆 Kids English Reading Club 招募暑期志愿者的一则广告。你打算结合自己的 经历和特长写信申请。广告如下： Library Volunteers Wanted Do you enjoy reading English books? Do you want to share that experience with little kids? We’re looking for devoted volunteers to pick and bring suitable books for the members of our Kids English Reading Club. You are also needed to talk with the members. Working Time: 9 A.M. to 12 NOON every Monday, Wednesday and Friday in the summer vocation Application letter: contact Mr Wang at kidsreading@126.com Thank you for supporting a good cause in bringing change. 注意事项： 1. 申请信要求符合情境、语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当增加细节； 2. 词数在 90 个左右，申请信的首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3. 申请信不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 4. 申请信内容必须写在答题卷的指定位置上。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Dear Mr Wang I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student from Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. I’m writing to you because I want to be a volunteer in your library. For one thing, I’ll have a freer summer vocation since I’m leaving middle school soon. I think I’ll have enough spare time for the job. For another, I have been interested in reading English books since I was little. I know perfectly well which books are suitable for little kids. What’s more, I’m patient enough to work with children. I will devote myself to the work. In general, I’m confident to serve as a good volunteer. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (90 words) 无锡市梁溪区 2019 年中考一模英语试题 八、书面表达（本大题共 15 分） 假设你是 Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为 My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的 短诗。近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。短诗如下： My English Teacher Miss Zhang There is a teacher, Miss Zhang, Who is friendly, patient and helpful. Always encouraging us to try, She leads us to a world of "why". We all respect and admire her. 注意事项： 1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文： 2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。 3.词数在 70 个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数： 4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Dear Editorial Office, I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher. She is Miss Zhang. She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too．She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since2001.She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher . I hope that you agree with me . Yours sincerely,