高三英语新题型读后续写不同主题分析--机智对付坏人学案

高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--机智对付坏人 板块一--例文 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事。续写的词数应为 150 词左右。 The big Town Hall clock was striking midnight when Frank began to cross the bridge. The dark night air was cold and a little wet, and the street lamp gave little light. Frank was anxious to get home and his footsteps rang loudly on the silent night. When he reached the middle of the bridge, he thought he could hear someone coming near behind him. He looked back but could see no one. However , the sound continued and Frank began to walk more quickly. Then he slowed down again , thinking there was nothing to fear in a town as quiet as this. Just then , he heard short , quick steps closely behind him. By the time he reached the other side of the bridge , he could almost feel someone at his heels. He turned round and there stood a man in a large coat. A hat was pulled down over his eyes and very little of his face could be seen. Frank said something about the weather in an effort to be friendly. The man did not answer but asked roughly where Oakfield House was. Frank pointed to a big house in the distance and the stranger continued his way. Then Frank wondered why the stranger had wanted to find Oakfield House at such an hour. He knew that the people who lived there were very rich. Almost without realizing what he was doing , he began following the stranger quickly. The man was soon outside the house and Frank saw him look up at the windows. A light was still on and the man waited until it went out. When about half an hour had passed, Frank saw him climb noiselessly over the wall and heard him drop on the ground at the other side. Paragraph 1: Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Frank couldn’t just stand in the dark and wait. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 【答案】Paragraph 1: Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do．Everyone knew that Oakfield House was filled with artwork worth millions of dollars. It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger. Would the man have a weapon? Would he be strong enough to overpower him before he could harm the people inside? Frank’s heart was racing with fear. He reached for his cellphone to call the police, but found it out of power. If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office, but it was too late. Paragraph 2: Frank couldn’t just stand in the dark and wait. He had to do something, even if it meant risking his own life. At his feet he silently found several good-sized stones, and he threw them with all his strength right at the windows of the house. The clatter woke up the people inside the house and a light came on upstairs. The man froze, not quite knowing what had just happened. Lights came on everywhere in the house and within a minute the night was filled with sounds of police sirens screaming towards Oakfield House. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达是读后续写。根据所给的两个段首句，来续写一个完整的故事。 【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，午夜时分 Frank 走在路上， 总感觉有人跟着自己，他放慢脚步，发现一个身穿大衣，帽檐遮脸的人，Frank 与其交 谈，试图表现出镇定的样子，而那人并不理睬，只顾着问 Oakfield House 怎么走。Frank 好奇陌生人为什么这么晚要去 Oakfield House，并且住在那里的人非常富有。想到这些， Frank 决定悄悄跟随谋生人看他到底要做什么，在 Oakfield House 外，Frank 看到陌生人 等灯全熄灭后翻墙进入了 Oakfield House 里面…… 根据段落首句，确定段落走向。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：现在 Frank 知道这个男人要干什么了。可能 Frank 猜出这个男子是盗贼。接下来 Frank 会做什么呢？第二段开头是：Frank 不能站在那里 干等。他又在等什么呢？很有可能 Frank 报了案，他认为不能干等着警察来。所以第一 段续写 Frank 报案，第二段 Frank 接下来采取了什么措施，最后盗贼被擒住。 【点睛】本文续写情节合情合理，内容拓展丰富，并且运用了丰富多变的句式：如 It was clear to Frank that the family inside was in danger. 此句运用了 it 做形式主语；If only he had charged his phone before leaving the office, but it was too late.此句运用了虚拟语气； He had to do something, even if it meant risking his own life.此句运用了让步状语从句…… 为文章增色添彩。 版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦 愤怒 1. She was burning with anger. 她怒火中烧。2. He easily loses his temper. 他很容易发脾 气。3. He was in a rage. 他大发雷霆。4. She was red with anger. 她因为发怒脸涨得通红。 More examples: 1. I was seized by anger.2. His anger boiled over.3. He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.4. His voice trembled with anger.5. He gave me a look of burning anger.6. He glared at me with burning eyes.7. His face clouded with anger. 感动 1. Touched deeply/immensely, we…2. Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.3. With tears streaming down her face, she... 害怕 ①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.③She was struck with horror when...④She was choked by fear.⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.⑥Fear flooded over him.⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. 板块三--能力提升（现学现用） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Late Night at the Zoo A zoo keeper had been working at a zoo for 15 years and never experienced any problems. He always worked the evening shifts because he was trusted to properly lock up the zoo. On a warm summer night in late June, the zoo keeper turned off the lights and wished all of his animals a good night. He left the zoo and walked to his car in the parking lot. As he reached in his back pocket he realized that his keys had gone missing. He rapidly turned around and realized he had left them inside the zoo. He quickly walked back towards the Zoo's entrance hoping he would see them along the way. When he arrived at the door, to his surprise, the door was unlocked. In fear of setting off the alarm that he had just set, he did not turn on the lights. The zoo keeper turned on the flashlight on his phone and began to make his way to the office. He looked around at all the animals in their cages and thought to himself how different the zoo becomes at night. When he walked by the lion's cages, he could see the young cubs playing together. He liked the zoo better at this hour because night was when the animals come to life. At last, he made it back to the office. Unfortunately this time, he was not so lucky. The office door was locked and he knew that if he were to break the window, he would set off the alarm. Knowing there was no way inside, the zoo keeper began to weigh his options. He knew he could not get into his home without his keys, so he decided it would be best to spend the night inside the zoo. The zoo keeper walked towards the bird cages because he knew he could sleep comfortably on the benches near the stage. A few hours later, the zoo keeper heard a door slam that woke him up. “Quiet!” a voice whispered. “What? There's no one here” another voice said, “The old man left hours ago.” “Alright, let's just grab the animals and get out of here.” The zoo keeper didn't know what to do. “What if they were armed?” the zoo keeper thought to himself. He listened closely and realized there was a group of burglars in the zoo. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The zoo keeper quietly got up and decided to investigate what was going on in the zoo. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________ Paragraph 2: The zoo keeper saw two people in front of a bird cage trying to break the lock. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________